<html><body><span style="font-family:Verdana; color:#000000; font-size:10pt;"><div> From: Emily Dirsh <<a href="mailto:emily@fightingcrane.com">emily@fightingcrane.com</a>><br>To: Fedora Design Team <<a href="mailto:design-team@lists.fedoraproject.org">design-team@lists.fedoraproject.org</a>><br>Subject: Re: [Design-team] Fedora "Baseball" Cards<br>Date: Thu, 17 May 2012 13:33:35 -0400<br><br><br>On Thu, 2012-05-17 at 13:14 -0400, Vanessa Kerr wrote:<br>> Hey team! <br>> Thanks for all of your help and suggestions with my projects since<br>> my internship with Mo started! Tomorrow is my last day and it would <br>> be great if somebody made some changes/suggestions to finalize these<br>> cards. <br>> <br>> ~Thanks!<br>> Vanessa<br><br>Hi Vanessa, <br><br>Looking these over, the drawings and the content are really good, all<br>I've got for you are nitpicks. :) Hopefully they're more helpful than<br>annoying.<br><br>The web developer card is the only one with a multi-line title. What do<br>you think about shortening it to 'Web Dev or Admin'? (if that will fit<br>on one line anyway)<br><br>There's also a discrepancy in the line heights of the web developer<br>description paragraph, the space between the 2nd and 3rd lines is<br>smaller than the space between the 1st and 2nd lines.<br><br>This is *very* nitpick-y and totally optional, but having the content<br>writer's favorite class be English seems very ... Anglo-centric - maybe<br>Grammar or Creative Writing or Literature would be better?<br><br>BTW - what fonts are you using? Also, do these have fronts/other sides?<br>I remember something about using gnokii's characters for the front, but<br>not sure if anything came out of that.<br><br>Okay, I'll desist for now.<br><br>Hope this helps,<br>Emily <br><br mce_bogus="1"></div></span></body></html>