release-notes/devel/en_US Multimedia.xml,1.8,1.9

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv4317

Modified Files:
	Multimedia.xml 
Log Message:
Good for FC6


Index: Multimedia.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Multimedia.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- Multimedia.xml	24 Sep 2006 20:41:49 -0000	1.8
+++ Multimedia.xml	25 Sep 2006 11:41:42 -0000	1.9
@@ -59,10 +59,10 @@
     <title>Ogg and Xiph.Org Foundation Formats</title>
     <para>
       Fedora includes complete support for the Ogg media container
-      format and the Vorbis audio, Theora video, Speex audio and FLAC
+      format and the Vorbis audio, Theora video, Speex audio, and FLAC
       lossless audio formats. These freely-distributable formats are not
       encumbered by patent or license restrictions. They provide
-      powerful and flexible alternatives to more popular, restricted
+      flexible alternatives to more popular, restricted
       formats. The Fedora Project encourages the use of open formats in
       place of restricted ones. For more information on these formats
       and how to use them, refer to the Xiph.Org Foundation's web site
@@ -88,8 +88,8 @@
     </para>
     <para>
       While other MP3 options may be available for Fedora, Fluendo now
-      offers an free MP3 plugin for GStreamer that has the necessary
-      patent license for end users. This plugin will enable MP3 support
+      offers a free MP3 plugin for GStreamer that has the necessary
+      patent license for end users. This plugin enables MP3 support
       in applications that use the GStreamer framework as a backend.
       Fedora does not include this plugin since we prefer to support and
       encourage the use of patent unrestricted open formats instead. For
@@ -101,16 +101,15 @@
   <section>
     <title>CD and DVD Authoring and Burning</title>
     <para>
-      Fedora Core and Fedora Extras software repositories includes a
-      variety of tools for easily mastering and burning CDs and DVDs.
-      GNOME users can burn directly from the Nautilus file manager, or
-      choose the <code>gnomebaker</code> or <code>graveman</code>
-      packages from Fedora Extras, or the older <code>xcdroast</code>
-      package from Fedora Core. KDE users can use the robust
-      <code>k3b</code> package, available in Fedora Extras, for these
-      tasks. Console tools include <code>cdrecord</code>,
-      <code>readcd</code>, <code>mkisofs</code> and other popular
-      applications.
+      Fedora Core and Fedora Extras software repositories includes a variety of
+      tools for easily mastering and burning CDs and DVDs. GNOME users can burn
+      directly from the <application>Nautilus</application> file manager, or
+      choose the <code>gnomebaker</code> or <code>graveman</code> packages from
+      Fedora Extras, or the older <code>xcdroast</code> package from Fedora
+      Core. KDE users can use the robust <code>k3b</code> package, available in
+      Fedora Extras, for these tasks. Console tools include
+      <code>cdrecord</code>, <code>readcd</code>, <code>mkisofs</code>, and
+      other popular applications.
     </para>
   </section>
 
@@ -136,7 +135,7 @@
       Most of the media players in Fedora Core and Fedora Extras
       software repositories can use plugins to add support for
       additional media formats and sound output systems. Some use
-      powerful multimedia frameworks, like the <code>gstreamer</code>
+      powerful multimedia frameworks, such as the <code>gstreamer</code>
       package, to handle media format support and sound output. Fedora
       Core and Fedora Extras software repositories offer plugin packages
       for these backends and for individual applications. Third parties