release-notes/devel/en_US ProjectOverview.xml,1.7,1.8

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv6406

Modified Files:
	ProjectOverview.xml 
Log Message:
Good for FC6


Index: ProjectOverview.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/ProjectOverview.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8
--- ProjectOverview.xml	24 Sep 2006 20:41:49 -0000	1.7
+++ ProjectOverview.xml	25 Sep 2006 11:55:16 -0000	1.8
@@ -21,13 +21,13 @@
     provide an operating system more in line with the ideals of free
     software and more appealing to the open source community. For more
     information, refer to the Fedora Project website at
-    <ulink url='http://fedora.redhat.com/'/>.
+    <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/'/>.
   </para>
 
   <para>
     The Fedora Project is driven by the individuals that contribute to
-    it. As a tester, developer, documenter or translator, you can make a
-    difference. See
+    it. As a tester, developer, documenter, or translator, you can make a
+    difference. Refer to
     <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/HelpWanted'/> for details.
     For information on the channels of communication for Fedora users
     and contributors, refer to
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    In order to talk on the <code>#fedora</code> channel, you will need
+    In order to talk on the <code>#fedora</code> channel, you need
     to register your nickname, or <emphasis>nick</emphasis>.
     Instructions are given when you <code>/join</code> the channel.
   </para>