en-US/Security.xml

Rüdiger Landmann rlandmann at fedoraproject.org
Thu Mar 18 22:00:35 UTC 2010


 en-US/Security.xml |    4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit c12ba17fd0808a22d34547ea5432d440c096ce6e
Author: Ruediger Landmann <r.landmann at redhat.com>
Date:   Fri Mar 19 07:59:44 2010 +1000

    Copyedit Security

diff --git a/en-US/Security.xml b/en-US/Security.xml
index 6d8e809..ba35aa7 100644
--- a/en-US/Security.xml
+++ b/en-US/Security.xml
@@ -89,8 +89,8 @@
   <section>
       <title>Policy Kit One</title>
     <para>
-      <application>PolicyKitOne</application> replaces the old deprecated  <application>PolicyKit </application> and allows the KDE
-      users to have a better experience of their applications and desktop in
+      <application>PolicyKitOne</application> replaces the old deprecated  <application>PolicyKit </application> and gives KDE
+      users a better experience of their applications and desktop in
       general. The Fedora&nbsp;12 KDE Desktop Edition used  <application>Gnome Authentication Agent </application>. 
        <application>PolicyKitOne</application> makes it possible to utilize the native KDE
       authentication agent,  <application>KAuth</application> in Fedora&nbsp;13.




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