[deployment-guide/comm-rel: 348/727] Rephrased a sentence a little.

Jaromir Hradilek jhradile at fedoraproject.org
Tue Oct 19 12:53:56 UTC 2010


commit 764a54b3f0e0c4170bd86634acedc4112789155a
Author: Jaromir Hradilek <jhradile at redhat.com>
Date:   Thu Aug 12 14:00:10 2010 +0200

    Rephrased a sentence a little.
    
    This is for the sake of consistency, really.

 en-US/The_BIND_DNS_Server.xml |    2 +-
 1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/The_BIND_DNS_Server.xml b/en-US/The_BIND_DNS_Server.xml
index 6e53af7..78fd121 100644
--- a/en-US/The_BIND_DNS_Server.xml
+++ b/en-US/The_BIND_DNS_Server.xml
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@
           <term><command>acl</command></term>
           <listitem>
             <para>
-              The <command>acl</command> (Access Control List) statement defines groups of hosts, so that they can be permitted or denied access to the nameserver. It takes the following form:
+              The <command>acl</command> (Access Control List) statement allows you to define groups of hosts, so that they can be permitted or denied access to the nameserver. It takes the following form:
             </para>
             <screen>acl <replaceable>acl-name</replaceable> {
   <replaceable>match-element</replaceable>;


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