[user-guide] minor updates for F14 fact checking

Fri Oct 22 02:11:12 UTC 2010

commit 2b8a978f8f4711161c8d11a3b7795e41a32e1933
Author: Susan Lauber <laubersm at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Thu Oct 21 22:10:47 2010 -0400

    minor updates for F14 fact checking

 en-US/Playing_games.xml |   44 +++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------
 1 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/Playing_games.xml b/en-US/Playing_games.xml
index 365e3c5..4c1fab0 100644
--- a/en-US/Playing_games.xml
+++ b/en-US/Playing_games.xml
@@ -16,10 +16,10 @@
 	<section id="sect-User_Guide-Playing_games-Default_GNOME_games">
 		<title>Default GNOME games</title>
 		<para>
-			Many GNOME games are not installed by default from the Live-CD or the DVD. If you do not have access to the Internet, you can use the Fedora DVD to install them, either using the <application>PackageKit application</application> or on the command line by using <application>Yum</application>. Refer to <xref linkend="chap-User_Guide-Managing_software" /> for help installing new software. Be sure to also install the separate <application>Help Files for gnome-games</application> which provides the instruction for playing each game.
+			Many GNOME games are not installed by default from the Live-CD or the DVD. If you do not have access to the Internet, you can use the Fedora DVD to install them, either using the <application>PackageKit application</application> or on the command line by using <application>Yum</application>. Refer to <xref linkend="chap-User_Guide-Managing_software" /> for help installing new software. Be sure to also install the separate <application>Help Files for gnome-games</application> which provides the instruction for playing each game. From the command line, the package name is <package>gnome-games-help</package>.
 		</para>
 		<para>
-			With the <application>Help Files for gnome-games</application> installed, use the menus to navigate to <menuchoice><guimenu>System </guimenu><guisubmenu> Help </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> Games</guisubmenu></menuchoice> to view a list of the available games. There is a brief description along with a link to details about playing each game. The detailed instructions can also be found from the <menuchoice><guimenu>Help </guimenu><guisubmenu> Contents</guisubmenu></menuchoice> menu in each game.
+			With <application>Help Files for gnome-games</application> installed, use the menus to navigate to <menuchoice><guimenu>System </guimenu><guisubmenu> Help </guisubmenu><guisubmenu> Games</guisubmenu></menuchoice> to view a list of the available games. There is a brief description along with a link to details about playing each game. The detailed instructions can also be found from the <menuchoice><guimenu>Help </guimenu><guisubmenu> Contents</guisubmenu></menuchoice> menu in each game.
 		</para>
 		<para>
 			There are a handful of small games in the basic GNOME games pack. 
@@ -57,8 +57,9 @@ and tile matching games such as Mahjongg. These are only a sampling of the games
 The <package>kdegames</package> package contains games for the current version of KDE and the <package>kdegames3</package> package contains additional games which have not yet been ported to KDE4.
 		</para>
 		<para>
-			The KDE games pack includes popular games similar to those provided by the GNOME games pack such as Kfourinline, Kbots, Ksudoku, Kreversi, and many more.  A sampling of other games included in the KDE games pack that may not be in other game packs include: 
+			The KDE games pack includes popular games similar to those provided by the GNOME games pack such as Kfourinline, Ksudoku, Kreversi, and many more.  A sampling of other games included in the KDE games pack that may not be in other game packs include: 
 			<variablelist>
+<!-- list too long... trim
 				<varlistentry>
 					<term><application>Bomber</application></term>
 					<listitem>
@@ -68,74 +69,75 @@ The <package>kdegames</package> package contains games for the current version o
 					</listitem>
 				</varlistentry>
 				<varlistentry>
-					<term><application>Kapman</application></term>
+					<term><application>KAtomic</application></term>
 					<listitem>
 						<para>
-							Pac-man type game
+							Fun and educational game built around molecular geometry
 						</para>
 					</listitem>
 				</varlistentry>
 				<varlistentry>
-					<term><application>KAtomic</application></term>
+					<term><application>KBlackBox</application></term>
 					<listitem>
 						<para>
-							Fun and educational game built around molecular geometry
+							Find the balls hidden in the black box by shooting laser beams
 						</para>
 					</listitem>
 				</varlistentry>
 				<varlistentry>
-					<term><application>KBlackBox</application></term>
+					<term><application>Kolf</application></term>
 					<listitem>
 						<para>
-							Find the balls hidden in the black box by shooting laser beams
+							A little mini-golf game
 						</para>
 					</listitem>
 				</varlistentry>
 				<varlistentry>
-					<term><application>KGoldrunner</application></term>
+					<term><application>Kollision</application></term>
 					<listitem>
 						<para>
-							A Lode Runner type of game
+							A ball dodging game
 						</para>
 					</listitem>
 				</varlistentry>
 				<varlistentry>
-					<term><application>KJumpingCube</application></term>
+					<term><application>Konquest</application></term>
 					<listitem>
 						<para>
-							A territory capture game
+							A galactic space game
 						</para>
 					</listitem>
 				</varlistentry>
+-->
 				<varlistentry>
-					<term><application>KNetWalk</application></term>
+					<term><application>Kapman</application></term>
 					<listitem>
 						<para>
-							A network construction game
+							Pac-man type game
 						</para>
 					</listitem>
 				</varlistentry>
 				<varlistentry>
-					<term><application>Kolf</application></term>
+					<term><application>KGoldrunner</application></term>
 					<listitem>
 						<para>
-							A little mini-golf game
+							A Lode Runner type of game
 						</para>
 					</listitem>
 				</varlistentry>
 				<varlistentry>
-					<term><application>Kollision</application></term>
+					<term><application>KJumpingCube</application></term>
 					<listitem>
 						<para>
-							A ball dodging game
+							A territory capture game
 						</para>
 					</listitem>
 				</varlistentry>
 				<varlistentry>
-					<term><application>Konquest</application></term>
+					<term><application>KNetWalk</application></term>
 					<listitem>
 						<para>
-							A galactic space game
+							A network construction game
 						</para>
 					</listitem>
 				</varlistentry>
