[release-notes] Correct various typos - BZ#741975
John J. McDonough
jjmcd at fedoraproject.org
Tue Oct 11 15:02:19 UTC 2011
commit 5dc3909d9d9e9177f5ac37b733d012ade0900acb
Author: John J. McDonough <jjmcd at fedoraproject.org>
Date: Tue Oct 11 11:02:11 2011 -0400
Correct various typos - BZ#741975
en-US/Amateur_Radio.xml | 6 +++---
en-US/Development_Tools.xml | 6 +++---
en-US/Networking.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Revision_History.xml | 14 ++++++++++++++
4 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Amateur_Radio.xml b/en-US/Amateur_Radio.xml
index ca31f68..1286853 100644
--- a/en-US/Amateur_Radio.xml
+++ b/en-US/Amateur_Radio.xml
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
</indexterm>
<para>
- <package>cutecw</package> hase been updated to 1.0. Improvements include better training sequences, a greatly improved "read-to-me" mode, and a number of cosmetic enhancements. For more information refer to <ulink url="http://www.hamtools.org/cutecw/">http://www.hamtools.org/cutecw/</ulink>
+ <package>cutecw</package> has been updated to 1.0. Improvements include better training sequences, a greatly improved "read-to-me" mode, and a number of cosmetic enhancements. For more information refer to <ulink url="http://www.hamtools.org/cutecw/">http://www.hamtools.org/cutecw/</ulink>
</para>
</section>
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- The complete upstream changelog is available at <ulink url="http://hamlib.sourceforge.net/NEWS">http://hamlib.sourceforge.net/NEWS</ulink> and there is more general information on the project's wiki at <ulink url="http://www.hamlib.org.">http://www.hamlib.org.</ulink>
+ The complete upstream changelog is available at <ulink url="http://hamlib.sourceforge.net/NEWS">http://hamlib.sourceforge.net/NEWS</ulink> and there is more general information on the project's wiki at <ulink url="http://www.hamlib.org">http://www.hamlib.org</ulink>.
</para>
</section>
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- More details may be found at <ulink url="http://www.qsl.net/5b4az/pkg/nec2/xnec2c/doc/xnec2c.html">http://www.qsl.net/5b4az/pkg/nec2/xnec2c/doc/xnec2c.html</ulink>
+ More details may be found at <ulink url="http://www.qsl.net/5b4az/pkg/nec2/xnec2c/doc/xnec2c.html">http://www.qsl.net/5b4az/pkg/nec2/xnec2c/doc/xnec2c.html</ulink>.
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Development_Tools.xml b/en-US/Development_Tools.xml
index b9f26dd..7d7447a 100644
--- a/en-US/Development_Tools.xml
+++ b/en-US/Development_Tools.xml
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
</indexterm>
<para>
- Ada is a modern programming language designed for large, long-lived applications – and embedded systems in particular – where reliability and efficiency are essential. It was originally developed in the early 1980s (this version is generally known as Ada 83) by a team led by Dr. Jean Ichbiah at CII-Honeywell-Bull in France. The language was revised and enhanced in an upward compatible fashion in the early 1990s, under the leadership of Mr. Tucker Taft from Intermetrics in the U.S. The resulting language, Ada 95, was the first internationally standardized (ISO) Object-Oriented Language. Under the auspices of ISO, a further (minor) revision was completed as an amendment to the standard; this version of the language is known as Ada 2005. Work is currently in progress on some additional features (including support for program anotations) and is expected to be completed in 2012.
+ Ada is a modern programming language designed for large, long-lived applications – and embedded systems in particular – where reliability and efficiency are essential. It was originally developed in the early 1980s (this version is generally known as Ada 83) by a team led by Dr. Jean Ichbiah at CII-Honeywell-Bull in France. The language was revised and enhanced in an upward compatible fashion in the early 1990s, under the leadership of Mr. Tucker Taft from Intermetrics in the U.S. The resulting language, Ada 95, was the first internationally standardized (ISO) Object-Oriented Language. Under the auspices of ISO, a further (minor) revision was completed as an amendment to the standard; this version of the language is known as Ada 2005. Work is currently in progress on some additional features (including support for program annotations) and is expected to be completed in 2012.
</para>
<para>
@@ -199,7 +199,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>
- a history of recently visited files (groupable by several criterias),
+ a history of recently visited files (groupable by several criteria),
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -305,7 +305,7 @@
</indexterm>
<para>
- Fedora 16 ships with <package>Perl 5.14</package>, which boasts Unicode version 6 compatibility, more reliable and consistent exception handling, improved IPV6 support, and performance and memory handling improvements. For the full list of changes (including syntax changes), please see the official Perl documentation: <ulink url="http://perldoc.perl.org/perl5140delta.html.">http://perldoc.perl.org/perl5140delta.html.</ulink>
+ Fedora 16 ships with <package>Perl 5.14</package>, which boasts Unicode version 6 compatibility, more reliable and consistent exception handling, improved IPV6 support, and performance and memory handling improvements. For the full list of changes (including syntax changes), please see the official Perl documentation: <ulink url="http://perldoc.perl.org/perl5140delta.html">http://perldoc.perl.org/perl5140delta.html</ulink>.
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Networking.xml b/en-US/Networking.xml
index ccb15e8..6b5c4da 100644
--- a/en-US/Networking.xml
+++ b/en-US/Networking.xml
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
</indexterm>
<para>
- New to Fedora 16 is <package>ckermit</package>, an updated implementation of the venerable Kermit file transfer program. The Kermit protocol is available on almost all architectures, so may well be the file transfer mechanism of choice when dealing with a less capable platform. The project's websit is <ulink url="http://www.columbia.edu/kermit/ck90.html">
+ New to Fedora 16 is <package>ckermit</package>, an updated implementation of the venerable Kermit file transfer program. The Kermit protocol is available on almost all architectures, so may well be the file transfer mechanism of choice when dealing with a less capable platform. The project's website is <ulink url="http://www.columbia.edu/kermit/ck90.html">
<ulink url="http://www.columbia.edu/kermit/ck90.html">http://www.columbia.edu/kermit/ck90.html</ulink>
</ulink>.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Revision_History.xml b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
index 07d961a..f8b2572 100644
--- a/en-US/Revision_History.xml
+++ b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
@@ -8,6 +8,20 @@
<simpara>
<revhistory>
<revision>
+ <revnumber>16.1</revnumber>
+ <date>Tue Oct 11 2011</date>
+ <author>
+ <firstname>John</firstname>
+ <surname>McDonough</surname>
+ <email>jjmcd at fedoraproject.org</email>
+ </author>
+ <revdescription>
+ <simplelist>
+ <member>Various typos - BZ#741975</member>
+ </simplelist>
+ </revdescription>
+ </revision>
+ <revision>
<revnumber>16.0</revnumber>
<date>Mon Oct 10 2011</date>
<author>
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