[musicians-guide] Finalized 15.9.5 before branch for F16

[Christopher Antila]

commit 6ec0c9f9a1120db3f1a4a3972883e9823418f245
Author: Christopher Antila <crantila at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Wed Sep 14 12:00:18 2011 -0400

    Finalized 15.9.5 before branch for F16

 en-US/Book_Info.xml        |    2 +-
 en-US/Contributors.xml     |    5 +++++
 en-US/Revision_History.xml |   21 ++++++++++++++++++++-
 3 files changed, 26 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Book_Info.xml b/en-US/Book_Info.xml
index 66ed0d6..69a323b 100644
--- a/en-US/Book_Info.xml
+++ b/en-US/Book_Info.xml
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 	<!-- Haydn: <subtitle>A guide to Fedora Linux's audio creation and music capabilities, written in a new and special way.</subtitle> -->
 	<productname>Fedora Draft Documentation</productname>
 	<pubsnumber>0</pubsnumber> <!-- N.B.: I have no idea why this is here, but the book doesn't work without it -CRA -->
-	<edition>15.9.4</edition>
+	<edition>15.9.5</edition>
   
 	<abstract>
 		<para>
diff --git a/en-US/Contributors.xml b/en-US/Contributors.xml
index a4dcee4..867c4d1 100644
--- a/en-US/Contributors.xml
+++ b/en-US/Contributors.xml
@@ -21,6 +21,11 @@
 					Motohiro Kanda (translator&mdash;Japanese)
 				</para>
 			</listitem>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+					<ulink url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Rlandmann">Ruedigger Landmann</ulink> (mentor)
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
 		</itemizedlist>
 	</para>
 	
diff --git a/en-US/Revision_History.xml b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
index fd2cdb5..fa6e3b1 100644
--- a/en-US/Revision_History.xml
+++ b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
@@ -371,11 +371,30 @@
 				</revdescription>
 			</revision>
 			
+			<revision>
+				<revnumber>15.9.5</revnumber>
+				<date>14 September 2011</date>
+				<author>
+					<firstname>Christopher</firstname>
+					<surname>Antila</surname>
+					<email>crantila at fedoraproject.org</email>
+				</author>
+				<revdescription>
+					<simplelist>
+					  <member>Added R. Landmann to list of contributors.</member>
+					  <member>Updated "ooolilypond" to refer to LibreOffice. Hope it's okay.</member>
+					  <member>Started to proofread LilyPond introductory material.</member>
+					  <member>Branched for Fedora 16.</member>
+					</simplelist>
+				</revdescription>
+			</revision>
+			
 			<!-- NOTE: When adding a revision above, be sure to update the <edition> tag in "Book_Info.xml" -->
 			
 			<!-- Fedora 16 (General) -->
 			<!-- TODO: standardize the paragraph about installing JACK -->
 			<!-- TODO: Bug 710330 ("Section 11.5.1 Broken Link to Local Help File") -->
+			<!-- DONE: Add R. Landmann to Contributors appendix -->
 			<!-- DONE: Update all files to use the &OPERATING_SYSTEM; and &O_S; entities for "Fedora Linux" and "Fedora" -->
 			<!-- QA: Bug 673519 ("Where is 'Percussion' check-box?") -->
 			<!-- DONE: finish the "TODO" in Ardour.xml at line 178 -->
@@ -385,8 +404,8 @@
 			
 			<!-- Fedora 16 (LilyPond) -->
 			<!-- TODO: Bug 710334 ("Section 12.7 Needs to Be Rewritten") -->
-			<!-- TODO: Introduction: is "ooolilypond" gone or replaced? -->
 			<!-- TODO: Revise the LilyPond introductory chapters -->
+			<!-- DONE: Introduction: is "ooolilypond" gone or replaced? -->
 			<!-- DONE: Bug 710336 ("Section 13 Integration with Section 12") -->
 			
 			<!-- Fedora 16 (Qthings) -->