[install-guide] Began noloader edits. Removed redundant TUI sections and edited Installing from DVD
Jack Reed
jjr at fedoraproject.org
Fri Mar 30 01:39:17 UTC 2012
commit 9bd9f926b69ee3da273169cc2c652900289394d3
Author: Jack Reed <jreed at redhat.com>
Date: Fri Mar 30 11:39:04 2012 +1000
Began noloader edits. Removed redundant TUI sections and edited Installing from DVD
en-US/Beginning_Installation-x86.xml | 2 +-
...ical_Installation_User_Interface_x86-note-1.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Installation_Method-x86.xml | 19 ++-----------------
en-US/Installation_Phase_2-common-para-1.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Installation_Phase_2-common-title-1.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Installation_Phase_2-x86.xml | 4 ++--
6 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Beginning_Installation-x86.xml b/en-US/Beginning_Installation-x86.xml
index 4742420..b6c9a94 100644
--- a/en-US/Beginning_Installation-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Beginning_Installation-x86.xml
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
</indexterm>
<xi:include href="Beginning_Installation_x86_ppc-para-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- If your DVD drive is not detected... --> <para>
- If the DVD drive is found and the driver loaded, the installer will present you with the option to perform a media check on the DVD. This will take some time, and you may opt to skip over this step. However, if you later encounter problems with the installer, you should reboot and perform the media check before calling for support. From the media check dialog, continue to the next stage of the installation process (refer to <xref linkend="sn-keyboard-x86" />).
+ If you later encounter problems with the installer, you should reboot and perform the media check by running the boot option <command>linux mediacheck</command> before seeking support.
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Graphical_Installation_User_Interface_x86-note-1.xml b/en-US/Graphical_Installation_User_Interface_x86-note-1.xml
index ac2117a..f202fce 100644
--- a/en-US/Graphical_Installation_User_Interface_x86-note-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Graphical_Installation_User_Interface_x86-note-1.xml
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
<screen>
<userinput>linux text</userinput></screen>
<para>
- Refer to <xref linkend="sn-boot-menu-x86" /> for a description of the Fedora boot menu and to <xref linkend="s1-guimode-textinterface-x86" /> for a brief overview of text mode installation instructions.
+ Refer to <xref linkend="sn-boot-menu-x86" /> for a description of the Fedora boot menu and to <xref linkend="ch-guimode-x86" /> for a brief overview of text mode installation instructions.
</para>
<xi:include href="Graphical_Installation_User_Interface_x86_ppc-note-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- It is highly recommended that installs... --> <xi:include href="Graphical_Installation_User_Interface_x86_ppc-note-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
diff --git a/en-US/Installation_Method-x86.xml b/en-US/Installation_Method-x86.xml
index 981cea8..7d8d01a 100644
--- a/en-US/Installation_Method-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installation_Method-x86.xml
@@ -7,24 +7,9 @@
<xi:include href="Installation_Method_common-title.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- Title: Language Selection --> <xi:include href="Installation_Method_common-indexterm.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<para>
- If you booted the installation from minimal boot media,use the arrow keys on your keyboard to select an installation method (refer to <xref linkend="fig-installationmethod-x86" />). With your selected method highlighted, press the <keycap>Tab</keycap> key to move to the <guibutton>OK</guibutton> button and press the <keycap>Enter</keycap> key to confirm your choice.
+ If you are installing from DVD, additional configuration will not be required unless the DVD drive is not detected. If you booted the installation from minimal boot media, use a boot prompt to select an installation method.
</para>
- <figure float="0" id="fig-installationmethod-x86">
- <xi:include href="Installation_Method_common-title.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="images/installationmethod/method.png" format="PNG" />
- </imageobject>
- <textobject>
- <para>
- Installation method screen.
- </para>
-
- </textobject>
-
- </mediaobject>
-
- </figure>
+
<xi:include href="Beginning_Installation-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- Installing from DVD --> <xi:include href="Beginning_Installation_Hard_Disk-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- Installing from a Hard Drive --> <xi:include href="Beginning_Installation_Network-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
diff --git a/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-common-para-1.xml b/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-common-para-1.xml
index d454013..67e25c9 100644
--- a/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-common-para-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-common-para-1.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- Before the graphical installation program starts, you need to configure the language and installation source.
+ Before the graphical installation program starts, you may need to configure the installation source depending on the method you are using.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-common-title-1.xml b/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-common-title-1.xml
index 824b9d9..0c250db 100644
--- a/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-common-title-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-common-title-1.xml
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
-<title>Configuring Language and Installation Source</title>
+<title>Configuring Installation Source</title>
diff --git a/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-x86.xml b/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-x86.xml
index 718a122..c89eddd 100644
--- a/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installation_Phase_2-x86.xml
@@ -6,10 +6,10 @@
<chapter id="ch-Installation_Phase_2-x86">
<xi:include href="Installation_Phase_2-common-title-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- Configuring Language and Installation Source --> <xi:include href="Installation_Phase_2-common-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <!-- Before the graphical installation program starts, you must choose a language --> <xi:include href="Graphical_Installation_x86-common-section-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- Before the graphical installation program starts, you must choose a language --> <!-- <xi:include href="Graphical_Installation_x86-common-section-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
<!-- The Text Mode Installation Program User Interface
links to Graphical_Installation_common-section-2.xml:
- Using the Keyboard to Navigate --> <xi:include href="Language_Selection-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ Using the Keyboard to Navigate --> <!-- <xi:include href="Language_Selection-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
<!-- Language Selection --> <xi:include href="Installation_Method-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- Installation Method --> <xi:include href="Verifying_Media.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- Verifying Media -->
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