[install-guide] First overhaul of Software Selection sections

Jack Reed jjr at fedoraproject.org
Thu Oct 25 02:02:33 UTC 2012


commit b7dd11b835c8e4487e3e13d5ae65add95fc5ceee
Author: Jack Reed <jreed at redhat.com>
Date:   Thu Oct 25 12:02:12 2012 +1000

    First overhaul of Software Selection sections

 en-US/Package_Selection-x86.xml               |   32 ++++++----
 en-US/Package_Selection_common-imagecap-1.xml |    2 +-
 en-US/Package_Selection_common-list-1.xml     |   78 +++++++++++++++++++++++--
 en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-10.xml    |    8 +++
 en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-11.xml    |    8 +++
 en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-7.xml     |    2 +-
 en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-8.xml     |    9 +++
 en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-9.xml     |    8 +++
 en-US/Package_Selection_common-title-1.xml    |    2 +-
 en-US/images/pkgselection/pkg-group.png       |  Bin 45251 -> 100969 bytes
 10 files changed, 128 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Package_Selection-x86.xml b/en-US/Package_Selection-x86.xml
index 6a6b5e8..266dc55 100644
--- a/en-US/Package_Selection-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Package_Selection-x86.xml
@@ -11,11 +11,11 @@
 	 <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-indexterm-4.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-indexterm-5.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-indexterm-6.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  End Index terms  --> <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Now that you have made most of the choices..  --> <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  End Index terms  --> <!-- <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-para-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
+	 <!--  Now that you have made most of the choices..  --> <!-- <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
 	 <!--  The Package Installation Defaults screen...  --> <!--  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Package_Selection_common-note-1.xml"/>  --> <!--  Fedora  --> <!--  Installing from a Live Image  --> <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-note-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  Installing in text mode  --> <figure float="0" id="fig-pkgselection-group-x86">
-		<title>Package Group Selection</title>
+		<title>Software Selection</title>
 		 <mediaobject>
 			<imageobject>
 				<imagedata fileref="images/pkgselection/pkg-group.png" format="PNG" width="444" />
@@ -29,19 +29,27 @@
 
 	</figure>
 	 <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-para-7.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  By default, the Fedora Installation process loads...  --> <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-list-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Office and Productivity
-	Software Development
-	Web server  --> <para>
+	 <!--  By default, Fedora installs the GNOME...  --> <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-list-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Graphical Desktops
+	GNOME Desktop
+	KDE Plasma Workspaces  --> <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-para-8.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Fedora will automatically install the base...  --> <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-para-9.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  To specify add-ons for installation...  --> <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-para-10.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  Once you have selected an environment...  --> <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-para-11.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  The packages that you select are not permanent...  -->
+
+
+	
+	<!-- <para>
 		If you choose to accept the current package list, skip ahead to <xref linkend="s1-installpkgs-x86" />.
 	</para>
 	 <para>
 		To select a component, click on the checkbox beside it (refer to <xref linkend="fig-pkgselection-group-x86" />).
-	</para>
-	 <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-para-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  To customize your package set further, select...  --> <xi:include href="Package_Selection_Repositories-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  You can define additional repositories to increase the software...  --> <xi:include href="Package_Selection_Customizing-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  Select Customize now to specify the software packages for your final...  --> <!-- 	<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Package_Selection_common-para-5.xml"/>  --> <!--  Select each component you wish to install. Selecting...  --> <!--  	<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Package_Selection_common-para-6.xml"/>  --> <!--  Once a package group has been selected, click on...  -->
+	      </para>
+	 <xi:include href="Package_Selection_common-para-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
+	   <!--  To customize your package set further, select...  --> <!-- <xi:include href="Package_Selection_Customizing-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
+	 <!--  Select Customize now to specify the software packages for your final...  --> <xi:include href="Package_Selection_Repositories-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	 <!--  You can define additional repositories to increase the software...  --> <!-- 	<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Package_Selection_common-para-5.xml"/>  --> <!--  Select each component you wish to install. Selecting...  --> <!--  	<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Package_Selection_common-para-6.xml"/>  --> <!--  Once a package group has been selected, click on...  -->
 </section>
 
 
diff --git a/en-US/Package_Selection_common-imagecap-1.xml b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-imagecap-1.xml
index 048df97..42739e8 100644
--- a/en-US/Package_Selection_common-imagecap-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-imagecap-1.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
 %BOOK_ENTITIES;
 ]>
 <para>
-	Choose which package groups you want to install.
+	Choose which environment and add-ons you want to install.
 </para>
 
diff --git a/en-US/Package_Selection_common-list-1.xml b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-list-1.xml
index 12647d3..acee6e6 100644
--- a/en-US/Package_Selection_common-list-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-list-1.xml
@@ -24,25 +24,74 @@
 	</varlistentry> -->
 	
 	<varlistentry>
-		<term>Graphical Desktop</term>
+		<term>Graphical Desktops (multiple options)</term>
 		<listitem>
 			<para>
-				This option provides the <application>OpenOffice.org</application> productivity suite, graphical tools such as the <application>GIMP</application>, and multimedia applications.
+				Fedora offers a variety of graphical desktop environments, which can be enhanced with add-ons such as the <application>LibreOffice</application> productivity suite, graphical tools such as the <application>GIMP</application>, and multimedia applications. The available environments are:
 			</para>
+		
+		
+		<itemizedlist>
+		  
+		  <listitem>
+		    <para>
+		      GNOME Desktop
+		    </para>
+		  </listitem>
+		  
+		  <listitem>
+		    <para>
+		      KDE Plasma Workspaces
+		    </para>
+		  </listitem>
+		  
+		  <listitem>
+		    <para>
+		      Xfce Desktop
+		    </para>
+		  </listitem>
+		  
+		  <listitem>
+		    <para>
+		      LXDE Desktop
+		    </para>
+		  </listitem>
+		  
+		  <listitem>
+		    <para>
+		      Cinnamon Desktop
+		    </para>
+		  </listitem>
+		  
+		  <listitem>
+		    <para>
+		      MATE Desktop
+		    </para>
+		  </listitem>
+		  
+		  <listitem>
+		    <para>
+		      Sugar Desktop Environment
+		    </para>
+		  </listitem>
+		
+		</itemizedlist>
+		
 		</listitem>
+		  
 	</varlistentry>
 
 	<varlistentry>
-		<term>Software Development</term>
+		<term>Development and Creative Workstation</term>
 		<listitem>
 			<para>
-				This option provides the necessary tools to compile software on your Fedora system.
+				This option provides the necessary tools to compile software and develop graphics and other content on your Fedora system.
 			</para>
 		</listitem>
 	</varlistentry>
 	
 	<varlistentry>
-		<term>Web server</term>
+		<term>Web Server</term>
 		<listitem>
 			<para>
 				This option provides the <application>Apache</application> web server.
@@ -50,9 +99,26 @@
 		</listitem>
 	</varlistentry>
 	
+	<varlistentry>
+		<term>Infrastructure Server</term>
+		<listitem>
+			<para>
+				This option provides a server for operating network infrastructure services.
+			</para>
+		</listitem>
+	</varlistentry>
+	
+	<varlistentry>
+		<term>Basic X Window System</term>
+		<listitem>
+			<para>
+				This option provides the X Window System without a full graphical desktop environment.
+			</para>
+		</listitem>
+	</varlistentry>
 	
 	<varlistentry>
-		<term>Minimal</term>
+		<term>Minimal Install</term>
 		<listitem>
 			<para>
 				This option provides only the packages essential to run Fedora. A minimal installation provides the basis for a single-purpose server or desktop appliance and maximizes performance and security on such an installation.
diff --git a/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-10.xml b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-10.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..f8d6eaf
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-10.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,8 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE para PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<para>
+	 Once you have selected an environment and any additional packages you may wish to install, click <guibutton>Done</guibutton> to return to the pre-installation hub.
+</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-11.xml b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-11.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..e2b2489
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-11.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,8 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE para PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<para>
+	The packages that you select are not permanent. After you boot your system, use the <application>Add/Remove Software</application> tool to either install new software or remove installed packages. To run this tool, from the main menu, select <menuchoice> <guimenu>System</guimenu> <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Add/Remove Software</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>. The Fedora software management system downloads the latest packages from network servers, rather than using those on the installation discs.
+</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-7.xml b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-7.xml
index 3a8af44..99b2663 100644
--- a/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-7.xml
+++ b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-7.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
 %BOOK_ENTITIES;
 ]>
 <para>
-	By default, the Fedora installation process loads a selection of software that is suitable for a system deployed as a basic server. Note that this installation does not include a graphical environment. To include a selection of software suitable for other roles, click the radio button that corresponds to one of the following options:
+	By default, Fedora installs the GNOME Desktop Environment, but in <guilabel>Software Selection</guilabel> you can choose from a range of other environments and customise additional packages to be installed as add-ons. Available environments are listed in the left-hand pane. To select an environment, click the radio button that corresponds to one of the following options:
 </para>
 
diff --git a/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-8.xml b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-8.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..a45a00f
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-8.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,9 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE para PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<para>
+	Fedora will automatically install the base and mandatory packages for the environment you select, but you can select additional package groups, or add-ons, from the right-hand pane. The list of add-ons is refreshed when a new environment is selected. Add-ons range from common utilities such as <application>Administrative Tools</application> and <application>LibreOffice</application> to specialist tools such as <application>Medical Applications</application> and <application>Robotics</application>
+</para>
+
diff --git a/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-9.xml b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-9.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..0318c3a
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-para-9.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,8 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE para PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<para>
+	 To specify add-ons for installation as part of the environment, select the check box next to each add-on.
+</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Package_Selection_common-title-1.xml b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-title-1.xml
index 390c83a..d6a3916 100644
--- a/en-US/Package_Selection_common-title-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Package_Selection_common-title-1.xml
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
 <!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
 %BOOK_ENTITIES;
 ]>
-<title>Package Group Selection</title>
+<title>Software Selection</title>
 
diff --git a/en-US/images/pkgselection/pkg-group.png b/en-US/images/pkgselection/pkg-group.png
index 5b44bd0..ce611cb 100644
Binary files a/en-US/images/pkgselection/pkg-group.png and b/en-US/images/pkgselection/pkg-group.png differ


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