[release-notes] proofread System Daemons beat

[Pete Travis]

commit f76b80de8f1327fad4c618d5436abfd9db1d2a4d
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Sun Oct 28 15:32:16 2012 -0600

    proofread System Daemons beat

 en-US/System_Daemons.xml |   22 ++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/System_Daemons.xml b/en-US/System_Daemons.xml
index 3bd2b10..73039d7 100644
--- a/en-US/System_Daemons.xml
+++ b/en-US/System_Daemons.xml
@@ -6,20 +6,18 @@
 
 
 <section>
-  
   <title>System Daemons</title>
-  
-
   <section>
-	<title>rngd </title>
-        <para>Random number generation is improved by enabling <package>rngd</package> by default. </para>
-      </section><section>
-          <title>SysV to systemd </title>
-        <para>Additional SystemV init scripts are migrated to <package>systemd</package> unit files to improve readability and boot times. </para>
-      </section><section>
-          <title>Expanding the admin toolkit with procps-ng </title>
-        <para> Fedora 18 brings the migration of legacy <package>procps</package> tools to <package>procps-ng</package>.  This provides better maintainability, expanded functionality, and better compatibility with scripts run on other distributions.  Users should consult the documentation in <filename>/usr/share/doc/procps-*</filename> for more information. </para>
-    
+    <title><application>SysVinit</application> to <application>systemd</application></title>
+    <para>
+      Additional <application>SystemV</application> init scripts are migrated to <application>systemd</application> <function>unit</function> files to improve readability and boot times. 
+    </para>
+  </section>
+  <section>
+    <title>Expanding the admin toolkit with <package>procps-ng</package></title>
+    <para> 
+      Fedora 18 brings the migration of legacy <package>procps</package> tools to <package>procps-ng</package>.  This provides better maintainability, expanded functionality, and better compatibility with scripts run on other distributions.  Users should consult the documentation in <filename>/usr/share/doc/procps-*</filename> for more information. 
+    </para>
   </section>
 </section>