[release-notes] I18n.xml | Typos and changed text to make it easier to translate.

stephenw stephenw at fedoraproject.org
Mon Oct 29 20:46:39 UTC 2012


commit a4858ef4586dcb601b1841aa014f8d27acc50627
Author: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley at redhat.com>
Date:   Mon Oct 29 21:41:17 2012 +0100

    I18n.xml | Typos and changed text to make it easier to translate.
    
    Consistent use of punctuation ( . at end of lines)
    We should not use the "/" symbol in text in place of "and", "or", etc.

 en-US/I18n.xml |   20 ++++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/I18n.xml b/en-US/I18n.xml
index 75979ee..1f99a66 100644
--- a/en-US/I18n.xml
+++ b/en-US/I18n.xml
@@ -18,29 +18,29 @@
             <para> On the GNOME Desktop, <package>im-chooser</package> is now deprecated except in fallback mode and with non-ibus input methods, since <productname>GNOME 3.6</productname> supports ibus as the default input method system.  Users should now use <application>gnome-control-center</application> to setup their input methods:
             <orderedlist numeration="arabic">
                 <listitem>
-                  <para> click on the user menu at the upper right corner of the panel. </para>
+                  <para> click on the user menu at the upper right corner of the panel.</para>
                 </listitem>
                 <listitem>
-                  <para> select <emphasis>System Settings</emphasis> from the menu</para>
+                  <para> select <emphasis>System Settings</emphasis> from the menu.</para>
                 </listitem>
                 <listitem>
-                  <para> click on the <emphasis>Region &amp; Language</emphasis> icon</para>
+                  <para> click on the <emphasis>Region &amp; Language</emphasis> icon.</para>
                 </listitem>
                 <listitem>
-                  <para> open the <emphasis>Input Sources</emphasis> tab</para>
+                  <para> open the <emphasis>Input Sources</emphasis> tab.</para>
                 </listitem>
                 <listitem>
-                  <para> click on <emphasis>+</emphasis> icon to add input sources</para>
+                  <para> click on <emphasis>+</emphasis> icon to add input sources.</para>
                 </listitem>
                 <listitem>
-                  <para> choose one or more input source you want to add </para>
+                  <para> choose one or more input sources you want to add.</para>
                 </listitem>
               </orderedlist>
             </para>
-            <para>If you can't find an input source in the list you are looking for, try running the following command in a terminal and restart the desktop: 
+            <para>If you can't find an input source you are looking for in the list, try running the following command in a terminal and restart the desktop: 
             <screen><command>gsettings set org.gnome.desktop.input-sources show-all-sources true</command></screen>
             </para>
-            <para> There may be no shortcut key to turn on/off the input method by default. you can enable it with the following steps: <orderedlist numeration="arabic">
+            <para> There may be no shortcut key to turn the input method on and off by default. you can enable it with the following steps: <orderedlist numeration="arabic">
                 <listitem>
                   <para> click the <guilabel>shortcut settings</guilabel> link in the <guilabel>Input Sources</guilabel> tab on <guilabel>System Settings</guilabel> or click the <guibutton>Keyboard</guibutton> icon at the top and the <guilabel>Shortcuts</guilabel> tab, the <guilabel>Typing</guilabel> section at the left pane.</para>
                 </listitem>
@@ -91,10 +91,10 @@
                 </listitem>
               </itemizedlist>
         </para>
-            <para> If you want to use non-ibus input method such as fcitx and uim etc, remove the <package>ibus</package> package from the system first and restart the desktop. <package>im-chooser</package> will get back to work on even GNOME.</para>
+            <para> If you want to use non-ibus input method such as fcitx and uim etc., remove the <package>ibus</package> package from the system first and restart the desktop. <package>im-chooser</package> will get back to work on even GNOME.</para>
       </section>
       <section>
-        <title>Fonts </title>
+        <title>Fonts</title>
         <para>
         <package>fonts-tweak-tool</package> now supports the language ordering to decide what language has precedence to display the text, and the font properties to change the sub-pixel rendering and hinting configuration per fonts.</para>
         <para><productname>Liberation</productname> fonts have been rebased to a fork of <productname>Google Croscore</productname> fonts with OFL license, better coverage, and some small enhancements. </para>


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