[release-notes/f20] fixing some clerical errors
Pete Travis
immanetize at fedoraproject.org
Tue Dec 10 02:06:21 UTC 2013
commit 787b66790305e4c66458ded9a22cef387ea6b5c8
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize at fedoraproject.org>
Date: Mon Dec 9 19:06:07 2013 -0700
fixing some clerical errors
en-US/Printing.xml | 8 ++------
1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Printing.xml b/en-US/Printing.xml
index 1344320..ca0e9ff 100644
--- a/en-US/Printing.xml
+++ b/en-US/Printing.xml
@@ -23,14 +23,13 @@
Detailed release notes are available at <ulink type="http" url="http://slic3r.org/releases/0.9.10b" />.
</para>
</section>
- <!-- update was blocked by pending review, which has been done. mhroncok will ping.
<section id="printing-3D-cura">
<title>Cura</title>
<para>
The latest version of 3D printing software <productname>Cura</productname> in Fedora 20 is a huge update compared to previous versions.
</para>
<para>
- <emphasis>Work faster</emphasis>:There's no prepare button, because there is no need to prepare: <productname>Cura</productname> comes with a new and much faster slicing engine that slices in realtime while you prepare your printing plate. Models that took hours to prepare now take minutes.
+ <emphasis>Work faster:</emphasis> There's no prepare button, because there is no need to prepare. <productname>Cura</productname> comes with a new and much faster slicing engine that slices in realtime while you prepare your printing plate. Models that took hours to prepare now take minutes.
</para>
<para>
<emphasis>Plan better:</emphasis> The <function>Project Planner</function> tool has been integrated into the main interface.
@@ -39,18 +38,15 @@
<emphasis>Build Stronger:</emphasis> Infills are done with a grid of squares rather than random lines, giving strength to your project without adding material.
</para>
<para>
- For details on using Cura, see the project's manual at <ulink url="http://blog.ultimaker.com/cura-user-manual/" />
+ For details on using Cura, refer to the project's manual at <ulink url="http://blog.ultimaker.com/cura-user-manual/" />
</para>
</section>
--->
-<!-- Review pending, but expected before GA;mhroncok will ping
<section id="printing-3D-simmarrange">
<title>simarrange</title>
<para>
Fedora 20 offers a new plating tool called <application>simarrange</application>. This command line utility takes a collection of STL files and arranges them to fit densely on a given plate size.
</para>
</section>
- -->
</section>
</section>
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