[release-notes/f20] fixing some clerical errors

Pete Travis immanetize at fedoraproject.org
Tue Dec 10 02:06:21 UTC 2013


commit 787b66790305e4c66458ded9a22cef387ea6b5c8
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Mon Dec 9 19:06:07 2013 -0700

    fixing some clerical errors

 en-US/Printing.xml |    8 ++------
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Printing.xml b/en-US/Printing.xml
index 1344320..ca0e9ff 100644
--- a/en-US/Printing.xml
+++ b/en-US/Printing.xml
@@ -23,14 +23,13 @@
 	Detailed release notes are available at <ulink type="http" url="http://slic3r.org/releases/0.9.10b" />.
       </para>
     </section>
-    <!-- update was blocked by pending review, which has been done. mhroncok will ping.
     <section id="printing-3D-cura">
       <title>Cura</title>
       <para>
 	The latest version of 3D printing software <productname>Cura</productname> in Fedora 20 is a huge update compared to previous versions.
       </para>
       <para>
-	<emphasis>Work faster</emphasis>:There's no prepare button, because there is no need to prepare: <productname>Cura</productname> comes with a new and much faster slicing engine that slices in realtime while you prepare your printing plate. Models that took hours to prepare now take minutes. 
+	<emphasis>Work faster:</emphasis> There's no prepare button, because there is no need to prepare. <productname>Cura</productname> comes with a new and much faster slicing engine that slices in realtime while you prepare your printing plate. Models that took hours to prepare now take minutes. 
       </para>
       <para>
 	<emphasis>Plan better:</emphasis> The <function>Project Planner</function> tool has been integrated into the main interface.
@@ -39,18 +38,15 @@
 	<emphasis>Build Stronger:</emphasis> Infills are done with a grid of squares rather than random lines, giving strength to your project without adding material.
       </para>
       <para>
-	For details on using Cura, see the project's manual at <ulink url="http://blog.ultimaker.com/cura-user-manual/" />
+	For details on using Cura, refer to the project's manual at <ulink url="http://blog.ultimaker.com/cura-user-manual/" />
       </para>
     </section>
--->
-<!-- Review pending, but expected before GA;mhroncok will ping
     <section id="printing-3D-simmarrange">
       <title>simarrange</title>
       <para>
 	Fedora 20 offers a new plating tool called <application>simarrange</application>. This command line utility takes a collection of STL files and arranges them to fit densely on a given plate size.
       </para>
     </section>
-    -->
   </section>
 </section>
   


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