[release-notes] Applying patch from BZ#872940, thanks to Yuri Chornoivan

Pete Travis immanetize at fedoraproject.org
Tue Jan 1 23:48:18 UTC 2013


commit 6ab82d5d65136fc9f26862b97915c737af84ace4
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Tue Jan 1 16:47:14 2013 -0700

    Applying patch from BZ#872940, thanks to Yuri Chornoivan

 en-US/Boot.xml       |    8 ++++----
 en-US/Networking.xml |    2 +-
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Boot.xml b/en-US/Boot.xml
index f5031e6..c735353 100644
--- a/en-US/Boot.xml
+++ b/en-US/Boot.xml
@@ -14,10 +14,10 @@
   </section>
   
   <section>
-    <title>Some <filename>/etc/sysconfig</filename> files have been depricated</title>
+    <title>Some <filename>/etc/sysconfig</filename> files have been deprecated</title>
     <!-- Thanks to Jóhann B. Guðmundsson for this info! -->
     <para>
-      A number of files in <filename>/etc/sysconfig</filename> have been depricated. These changes should be transparent to most applications.
+      A number of files in <filename>/etc/sysconfig</filename> have been deprecated. These changes should be transparent to most applications.
     </para>
     <section>
       <title><filename>/etc/sysconfig/clock</filename> replaced by <filename>/etc/localtime</filename></title>
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
         <screen><command>timedatectl set-local-rtc 1</command></screen>
       </para>
       <para>
-        For more informatino on how <application>systemd</application> deals with time, see <command>man timedatectl</command> and <command>man localtime</command>.
+        For more information on how <application>systemd</application> deals with time, see <command>man timedatectl</command> and <command>man localtime</command>.
       </para>
     </section>
     <section>
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
    <section>
      <title>Hostname configuration moved from <filename>/etc/sysconfig/network</filename> to <filename>/etc/hostname</filename></title>
      <para>
-       There are now three seperate classes of hostnames in use on a given system. The <emphasis>pretty</emphasis> hostname is the high level hostname often presented to users by their desktop environment or shell. The <emphasis>static</emphasis> hostname is used by the kernel at boot, and is usually the system's <literal>fully qualified domain name</literal>. A system may also have a <emphasis>transient</emphasis> hostname assigned by a dhcp server. <application>hostnamectl</application> is provided for administering these hostnames:
+       There are now three separate classes of hostnames in use on a given system. The <emphasis>pretty</emphasis> hostname is the high level hostname often presented to users by their desktop environment or shell. The <emphasis>static</emphasis> hostname is used by the kernel at boot, and is usually the system's <literal>fully qualified domain name</literal>. A system may also have a <emphasis>transient</emphasis> hostname assigned by a dhcp server. <application>hostnamectl</application> is provided for administering these hostnames:
      </para>
      <segmentedlist>
        <segtitle>Command</segtitle>
diff --git a/en-US/Networking.xml b/en-US/Networking.xml
index 3d86553..a327a8e 100644
--- a/en-US/Networking.xml
+++ b/en-US/Networking.xml
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
           <title>Better network security with <application>firewalld</application></title>
           <para>
           The firewall daemon <package>firewalld</package> will be the default firewall solution for Fedora 18, replacing <package>iptables</package>. Using <application>firewalld</application> will allow for application of policy changes without reloading, allowing connection states to stay unbroken when rules are changed.</para>
-          <para>A <function>D-BUS</function> interface allows approved applications to communicate thier status and present complex or temporary needs to the firewall without requiring hand configuration by an administrator. This improves support for dynamic environments such as <application>libvirtd</application>, which previously had to be restarted when <application>iptables</application> rules were changed.</para>
+          <para>A <function>D-BUS</function> interface allows approved applications to communicate their status and present complex or temporary needs to the firewall without requiring hand configuration by an administrator. This improves support for dynamic environments such as <application>libvirtd</application>, which previously had to be restarted when <application>iptables</application> rules were changed.</para>
           <para>Manual administration can be done with <command>firewall-cmd</command>. Documentation on firewalld can be found in the included manpages: <filename>firewall-cmd(1)</filename>, <filename>firewalld(1)</filename>, <filename>firewalld.conf(5)</filename>, <filename>firewalld.icmptype(5)</filename>, <filename>firewalld.service(5)</filename>, <filename>firewalld.zone(5)</filename>.</para>
       </section>
       <section>


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