[release-notes] More fixes from BZ 872940

Ben Cotton bcotton at fedoraproject.org
Tue Jan 15 20:38:37 UTC 2013


commit a74cf0709765f867a3e01f35915e867dee272608
Author: Ben Cotton <bcotton at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Tue Jan 15 15:36:56 2013 -0500

    More fixes from BZ 872940

 en-US/I18n.xml           |    2 +-
 en-US/Installation.xml   |    4 ++--
 en-US/Virtualization.xml |    2 +-
 3 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/I18n.xml b/en-US/I18n.xml
index cc4219a..a6d9337 100644
--- a/en-US/I18n.xml
+++ b/en-US/I18n.xml
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
 	</title>
 	<section>
 	  <title><command>localectl</command></title>
-	  <para><command>localectl</command> is a new utility used to query and change the system locale and keyboard layout settings. Settings used in text consoles and inherited by deskop enviromnents. <command>localectl</command> also accepts a hostname argument to administer remote systems over ssh.
+	  <para><command>localectl</command> is a new utility used to query and change the system locale and keyboard layout settings. Settings used in text consoles and inherited by desktop enviromnents. <command>localectl</command> also accepts a hostname argument to administer remote systems over ssh.
 	  </para>
 	</section>
       </section>
diff --git a/en-US/Installation.xml b/en-US/Installation.xml
index 36cc106..5214ad9 100644
--- a/en-US/Installation.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installation.xml
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@
     <section>
       <title>Running the Upgrade</title>
       <para>
-        Once you reboot, there will be a 'System Upgrade' boot option at the grub prompt. The system will boot into a special environment to perform the upgrade.The screen will show a graphical progress screen during upgrade.
+        Once you reboot, there will be a 'System Upgrade' boot option at the grub prompt. The system will boot into a special environment to perform the upgrade. The screen will show a graphical progress screen during upgrade.
       </para>
       <note>
         <title>Go get some coffee</title>
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@
     </section>
     <section>
       <title>Third party modules</title>
-      <para>The <filename>initramfs</filename> created by FedUP may need to be rebuild in some cases where drivers are provided by a third party repository. If you experience issues with thrid party drivers after the upgrade, boot into a single or multi-user target and issue the following command:
+      <para>The <filename>initramfs</filename> created by FedUP may need to be rebuilt in some cases where drivers are provided by a third party repository. If you experience issues with third party drivers after the upgrade, boot into a single or multi-user target and issue the following command:
       <screen>
         <command># dracut /boot/initramfs-$(uname -r).img $(uname -r)</command>
       </screen>
diff --git a/en-US/Virtualization.xml b/en-US/Virtualization.xml
index 774b4d6..bf2af37 100644
--- a/en-US/Virtualization.xml
+++ b/en-US/Virtualization.xml
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
   </section>
   <section>
     <title>Manage Virtualized Environments with <productname>oVirt 3.1</productname> </title>
-    <para>The <productname>oVirt</productname> virtualization management platform has been significantly expanded in Fedora 18 with the upgrade to version 3.1 For more information, consult the oVirt 3.1 Release Notes at <ulink url="http://www.ovirt.org/OVirt_3.1_release_notes">http://www.ovirt.org/OVirt_3.1_release_notes</ulink> and the <productname>oVirt</productname> Quick Start Guide at <ulink url="http://wiki.ovirt.org/wiki/Quick_Start_Guide">http://wiki.ovirt.org/wiki/Quick_Start_Guide</ulink>.
+    <para>The <productname>oVirt</productname> virtualization management platform has been significantly expanded in Fedora 18 with the upgrade to version 3.1. For more information, consult the oVirt 3.1 Release Notes at <ulink url="http://www.ovirt.org/OVirt_3.1_release_notes">http://www.ovirt.org/OVirt_3.1_release_notes</ulink> and the <productname>oVirt</productname> Quick Start Guide at <ulink url="http://wiki.ovirt.org/wiki/Quick_Start_Guide">http://wiki.ovirt.org/wiki/Quick_Start_Guide</ulink>.
          </para>
     </section>
   </section>


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