[readme-burning-isos] Improved sect-Burning_ISO_images_to_disc-Burning-Windows-old Delete superfluous text, improved marku

stephenw stephenw at fedoraproject.org
Thu Jul 4 09:01:52 UTC 2013


commit 2efa3a31bddcba0f0a7b6cac5789087e7052481b
Author: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley at redhat.com>
Date:   Thu Jul 4 10:37:17 2013 +0200

    Improved sect-Burning_ISO_images_to_disc-Burning-Windows-old
    Delete superfluous text, improved markup.

 en-US/Burning.xml |   12 ++++++------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Burning.xml b/en-US/Burning.xml
index fce6b06..898d4d3 100644
--- a/en-US/Burning.xml
+++ b/en-US/Burning.xml
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
 		<section id="sect-Burning_ISO_images_to_disc-Burning-Windows-old">
 			<title>Burning discs with older Windows operating systems</title>
 			<para>
-				The CD burning feature built into Windows XP and Windows&nbsp;Vista cannot burn CDs from images and Windows operating systems before Windows&nbsp;XP did not have any built-in CD burning capability at all. Therefore, to turn an ISO image files into a CD or DVD on Windows operating systems prior to Windows&nbsp;7, you need separate disc burning software that can handle ISO image files.  Although this is true of most disc burning software, exceptions exist.
+				The CD burning feature built into Windows XP and Windows&nbsp;Vista cannot burn CDs from images and Windows operating systems before Windows&nbsp;XP did not have any built-in CD burning capability at all. Therefore, to turn an ISO image files into a CD or DVD on Windows operating systems prior to Windows&nbsp;7, you need separate disc burning software that can handle ISO image files.
 			</para>
 			<para>
 				Examples of popular CD burning software for Windows that you might already have on your computer include <application>InfraRecorder</application>, <application>Nero Burning ROM</application>, and <application>Roxio Creator</application>. If you use a Windows operating system on your computer and do not have disc burning software installed (or you are not sure that the software can burn discs from image files) <application>InfraRecorder</application> is a suitable solution available from <ulink url="http://www.infrarecorder.org/"></ulink>, and is free and open-source. 
@@ -51,12 +51,12 @@
 			<section id="sect-Burning_ISO_images_to_disc-Burning-Using_InfraRecorder">
 				<title>Using InfraRecorder</title>
 				<para>
-					Obtain and install InfraRecorder from the <ulink url="http://infrarecorder.org"></ulink> web site.
+					Obtain and install <application>InfraRecorder</application> from the <ulink url="http://infrarecorder.org"></ulink> web site.
 				</para>
 				<procedure>
 					<step>
 						<para>
-                                                        Start <guilabel>InfraRecorder</guilabel>.
+                                                        Start <application>InfraRecorder</application>.
                                                 </para>
                                         </step>
                                         <step>
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
                                         </step>
 					<step>
 						<para>
-							Select 4X as the write speed.
+							Select <literal>4X</literal> as the write speed.
 						</para>
 					</step>
 					<step>
@@ -351,12 +351,12 @@ wodim: Overview of accessible drives (1 found) :
 			       Using the output from above identify your drive location. In this example it would be /dev/scd0, and issue the following command to burn the cd. 
 			     </para>
 			     <para>
-			       <command>wodim -v dev=/dev/xxx speed=4 -eject /path/to/Fedora.iso</command>.
+			       <command>wodim -v <replaceable>dev=/dev/xxx</replaceable> speed=4 -eject <replaceable>/path/to/Fedora.iso</replaceable></command>.
 			     </para>
 			       <note>
 				 <title>Replace values</title>
 				 <para>
-				   Be sure to replace the dev=/dev/xxx with your drive path, and /path/to/Fedora.iso to the actual path and name of the ISO file
+				   Be sure to replace the <replaceable>dev=/dev/xxx</replaceable> with your drive path, and <replaceable>/path/to/Fedora.iso</replaceable> to the actual path and name of the ISO file.
 				 </para>
 			       </note>
 			   </step>


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