[install-guide] BZ#982656 - Completely reworked 9.17. Installation Complete

pbokoc pbokoc at fedoraproject.org
Tue Jul 30 17:48:36 UTC 2013


commit 1852bb4127b1c7391a836c20f9045f19c6bfb579
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc at redhat.com>
Date:   Tue Jul 30 19:47:53 2013 +0200

    BZ#982656 - Completely reworked 9.17. Installation Complete

 en-US/Complete-x86.xml                             |    5 +--
 en-US/Complete_common-gnome-initial-experience.xml |   29 +++++++++++++++++
 en-US/Complete_common-initial-experience.xml       |   33 --------------------
 en-US/Complete_common-other-initial-experience.xml |   27 ++++++++++++++++
 en-US/Complete_common-para-1.xml                   |    2 +-
 en-US/firstboot-systemuser.xml                     |    2 +-
 ...n.png => gnome-initial-setup-langselection.png} |  Bin 310377 -> 310377 bytes
 en-US/images/welcome/initial-setup-hub.png         |  Bin 0 -> 15819 bytes
 8 files changed, 60 insertions(+), 38 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Complete-x86.xml b/en-US/Complete-x86.xml
index 365d548..7b3ac6e 100644
--- a/en-US/Complete-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Complete-x86.xml
@@ -9,7 +9,6 @@
 	 <!--  Congratulations! Your installation is now complete!  --> <xi:include href="Complete_common-figure-1.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  Packages installed  --> <xi:include href="Complete_x86-para-2.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	 <!--  The installation program prompts you to prepare your  --> <xi:include href="Complete_common-para-3.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	 <!--  After your computer's normal power-up sequence has completed  --> <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Complete_common-initial-experience.xml"/>
+	 <!--  GNOME Initial Setup  --> <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Complete_common-gnome-initial-experience.xml"/>
+	 <!--  Initial Setup in Other Desktop Environments  --> <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="Complete_common-other-initial-experience.xml"/>
 </section>
-
-
diff --git a/en-US/Complete_common-gnome-initial-experience.xml b/en-US/Complete_common-gnome-initial-experience.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..8e05d4c
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Complete_common-gnome-initial-experience.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,29 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<section id="sect-gnome-initial-setup">
+	<title>GNOME Initial Setup</title>
+	<para>
+		If you selected <application>GNOME</application> as your default desktop environment, you will be presented with a <guilabel>Welcome</guilabel> screen when the newly installed system starts for the first time. Here you can configure your system settings, such as the time zone, keyboard layout and language. If you have not created a user account during the installation, you will be prompted to create one. All of the options available here can be changed using built-in tools accessible from the <guimenu>Activities</guimenu> menu after the initial setup is complete.
+	</para>
+	<para>
+		After you have finished configuring the available options, click the <guilabel>Start using GNOME 3</guilabel> button on the application's final screen. You will then be able to log in to your user account. 
+	</para>
+	<para>
+		When you log in for the first time, a <guilabel>Desktop Help</guilabel> window will automatically open, allowing you to view tutorials and watch several videos showcasing some of the desktop environment's features.
+	</para>
+	<figure float="0" id="figu-gnome-initial-setup"><title>Language selection in GNOME Initial Setup</title>
+		<mediaobject>
+			<imageobject>
+				<imagedata fileref="images/welcome/gnome-initial-setup-langselection.png" format="PNG" scalefit="0" />
+			</imageobject>
+			<textobject>
+				<para>
+					The first screen of the GNOME Initial Setup application, showing a language selection menu.
+				</para>
+			</textobject>
+		</mediaobject>
+	</figure>
+</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Complete_common-other-initial-experience.xml b/en-US/Complete_common-other-initial-experience.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..3cef389
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Complete_common-other-initial-experience.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,27 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<section id="sect-other-initial-setup">
+	<title>Initial Setup in Other Desktop Environments</title>
+	<para>
+		In desktop environments other than <application>GNOME</application>, such as <application>XFCE</application> or <application>KDE</application>, you will only be presented with a screen allowing you to customize system settings and create a user account if you have not done so during the installation. If you have configured your language, keyboard layout, time zone and created a user previously (for example during the graphical installation), you will be able to log in and start using your system immediately. If only some of the available options are configured, the Initial Setup menu will prompt you the remaining ones.  
+	</para>
+	<para>
+		The Initial Setup application works the same way as the <application>Anaconda</application> graphical installer. For instructions on how to configure the available settings, see <xref linkend="s1-guimode-interface-x86" />.
+	</para>
+	<figure float="0" id="figu-other-initial-setup">
+		<title>The Initial Setup Menu</title>
+		<mediaobject>
+			<imageobject>
+				<imagedata fileref="images/welcome/initial-setup-hub.png" format="PNG" scalefit="0" />
+			</imageobject>
+			<textobject>
+				<para>
+					The Initial Setup application's hub, allowing you to configure options not specified during the installation.
+				</para>
+			</textobject>
+		</mediaobject>
+	</figure>
+</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Complete_common-para-1.xml b/en-US/Complete_common-para-1.xml
index d130232..5535272 100644
--- a/en-US/Complete_common-para-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Complete_common-para-1.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
 %BOOK_ENTITIES;
 ]>
 <para>
-	Congratulations! Now that you have configured the remaining settings, your Fedora installation is now complete!
+	Congratulations! Now that you have configured the remaining settings, your Fedora installation is complete.
 </para>
 
diff --git a/en-US/firstboot-systemuser.xml b/en-US/firstboot-systemuser.xml
index 308eeb4..d3d1cfe 100644
--- a/en-US/firstboot-systemuser.xml
+++ b/en-US/firstboot-systemuser.xml
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 	<important condition="install-guide">
 		<title>Important — Create at least one user account</title>
 		<para>
-			If you selected GNOME as your desktop environment during the package selection process, you will be able to create an user account after the installation finishes. Other desktop environments, such as KDE or Xfce, do not offer this functionality. It is therefore important to create at least one user account during this step; otherwise you will not be able to log in to the Fedora graphical environment. If you skipped this step during installation, refer to <xref linkend="Trouble_After_Booting-GUI"/>.
+			If you selected GNOME as your desktop environment during the package selection process, you will be able to create a user account after the installation finishes. Other desktop environments, such as KDE or Xfce, do not offer this functionality. It is therefore important to create at least one user account during this step; otherwise you will not be able to log in to the Fedora graphical environment. If you skipped this step during installation, refer to <xref linkend="Trouble_After_Booting-GUI"/>.
 		</para>
 	</important>
 	<note condition="install-guide">
diff --git a/en-US/images/welcome/initial-setup-langselection.png b/en-US/images/welcome/gnome-initial-setup-langselection.png
similarity index 100%
rename from en-US/images/welcome/initial-setup-langselection.png
rename to en-US/images/welcome/gnome-initial-setup-langselection.png
diff --git a/en-US/images/welcome/initial-setup-hub.png b/en-US/images/welcome/initial-setup-hub.png
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..b9612f3
Binary files /dev/null and b/en-US/images/welcome/initial-setup-hub.png differ


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