[install-guide] Updated Live Image installation description in 'Which Files do I Download?' section

Jack Reed jjr at fedoraproject.org
Wed Mar 27 03:31:29 UTC 2013


commit 62f581be5a06592394ed611f94cc9f2fa6ee3081
Author: Jack Reed <jreed at redhat.com>
Date:   Wed Mar 27 13:31:16 2013 +1000

    Updated Live Image installation description in 'Which Files do I Download?' section

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diff --git a/en-US/new-users.xml b/en-US/new-users.xml
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@@ -235,13 +235,12 @@ AMD: Athlon 64, Athlon II, Sempron64, Phenom series, Fusion series, Bulldozer se
 	    your computer, download the Live image version. If your
 	    computer supports booting from CD or USB, you can boot the
 	    operating system without making any changes to your hard
-	    disk. The Live image also provides an <literal>Install to
-	    Hard Disk</literal> desktop shortcut (alternatively, the shortcut can be found in 
-	    <menuchoice> <guimenu>Applications</guimenu> <guisubmenu>System Tools</guisubmenu> </menuchoice>). 
-	    If you decide you like what you see, and want to install it, simply activate
-	    the selection to copy Fedora to your hard disk.  You can
-	    download the Live image directly from a mirror, or using
-	    BitTorrent.</para>
+	    disk. If you decide you like what you see, and want to install 
+	    it, select <literal>Install to Hard Drive</literal> on the 
+	    desktop to copy Fedora to your hard disk (alternatively, in GNOME, 
+	    a shortcut can be found in the <guimenu>Activities</guimenu> 
+	    menu).  You can download the Live image directly from 
+	    a mirror, or using BitTorrent.</para>
 	</formalpara>
 	<para>
 	  For more detailed instructions on setting up a Live image installation, including selecting a language for the installation process, refer to the <citetitle>Fedora Installation Quick Start Guide</citetitle>.


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