[release-notes] Markup improvments

[stephenw]

commit 63a1f847eadad9cc5dd235b6169c1a292543d793
Author: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley at redhat.com>
Date:   Tue May 14 17:01:14 2013 +0200

    Markup improvments

 en-US/Networking.xml |    6 +++---
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/Networking.xml b/en-US/Networking.xml
index 118692f..7e888d3 100644
--- a/en-US/Networking.xml
+++ b/en-US/Networking.xml
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
   <section>
     <title>firewalld improvements</title>
     <para>
-      <application>firewalld</application>, introduced as the default firewall solution for Fedora &PREVVER;, adds new features to allow easy configuration of powerful firewalls.
+      The firewall daemon, <systemitem class="daemon">firewalld</systemitem>, introduced as the default firewall solution in Fedora &PREVVER;, adds new features to allow easy configuration of this powerful firewall.
     </para>
     <section>
       <title>Locking the firewall and whitelisting changes</title>
@@ -77,12 +77,12 @@
     <indexterm><primary>bind</primary></indexterm>
     <indexterm><primary>dhcpd</primary></indexterm>
     <para>
-      The <application>BIND10</application> is now shipped in the Fedora repositories. This includes the <package>named</package> DNS server, <package>dhcpd</package>, and related utilities. Documentation is available at <ulink url="http://bind10.isc.org/wiki" /> and the <ulink url="http://bind10.isc.org/docs/bind10-guide.html">BIND10 Guide</ulink>.
+      The <application>BIND10</application> is now shipped in the Fedora repositories. This includes the DNS server daemon <systemitem class="daemon">named</systemitem>, the <systemitem class="daemon">dhcpd</systemitem> server daemon, and related utilities. Documentation is available at <ulink url="http://bind10.isc.org/wiki" /> and the <ulink url="http://bind10.isc.org/docs/bind10-guide.html">BIND10 Guide</ulink>.
     </para>
   </section>
 
   <section>
-    <title>stable network interface naming</title>
+    <title>Stable network interface naming</title>
     <para>
       The <function>udevd</function> service has a long history of providing predictable names for block devices and others. Fedora will now also use <function>udev</function> naming for network interfaces by default, providing more reliable interface names on systems with multiple network devices. Alternative naming schemes, such as custom udev rules or <package>biosdevname</package>, will override this default. Users upgrading from previous releases may need to update the device names referenced in <filename>/etc/system/network-scripts/</filename>, although in most cases <package>biosdevname</package> will continue to manage naming.
     </para>