[release-notes] Cleaning up prose around OpenLMI

Pete Travis immanetize at fedoraproject.org
Tue May 14 23:04:43 UTC 2013


commit 39943e304144c17f8f665c96d691e419794f938f
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Tue May 14 17:04:23 2013 -0600

    Cleaning up prose around OpenLMI

 en-US/Server_Configuration_Tools.xml |    2 +-
 1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Server_Configuration_Tools.xml b/en-US/Server_Configuration_Tools.xml
index c40f330..3061757 100644
--- a/en-US/Server_Configuration_Tools.xml
+++ b/en-US/Server_Configuration_Tools.xml
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
   <section>
     <title>Easier Administration with <package>OpenLMI</package></title>
     <para>
-      The OpenLMI infrastructure has been greatly improved. A new storage API, monitoring, hardware information, realmd, firewall providers have been added. Improvements have also been made in in the existing providers. Packaged documentation has been updated to reflect the new features.
+      The OpenLMI infrastructure has been greatly improved. A new storage API and providers for monitoring, hardware information, realmd, and firewall have been added. Improvements have also been made in in the existing providers. Packaged documentation has been updated to reflect the new features.
     </para>
   </section>
 


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