[install-guide] Moved 'Create User' section to 'Configuration Menu and Progress Screen'; made clarifying edits and r

[Jack Reed]

commit d5191142ca4e5cedecc6e51c711fc49d2f440d01
Author: Jack Reed <jreed at redhat.com>
Date:   Wed May 15 16:01:45 2013 +1000

    Moved 'Create User' section to 'Configuration Menu and Progress Screen'; made clarifying edits and replaced figure

 en-US/Progress_Hub-x86.xml               |    3 ++-
 en-US/Progress_Hub_common-para-3.xml     |    2 +-
 en-US/firstboot-systemuser.xml           |    6 +++---
 en-US/firstboot.xml                      |    2 +-
 en-US/images/firstboot/fb-createuser.png |  Bin 37344 -> 30124 bytes
 5 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Progress_Hub-x86.xml b/en-US/Progress_Hub-x86.xml
index b218e22..60a5958 100644
--- a/en-US/Progress_Hub-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Progress_Hub-x86.xml
@@ -12,7 +12,8 @@
 	 <!--   While the packages are being installed  -->
 	 
 	 <xi:include href="Account_Configuration-x86.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide"/>
-	 <!--  Account Configuration  --> 
+	 <!--  Account Configuration  --> <xi:include href="firstboot-systemuser.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" condition="install-guide"/>
+	 <!--  User Creation  --> 
 </section>
 
 
diff --git a/en-US/Progress_Hub_common-para-3.xml b/en-US/Progress_Hub_common-para-3.xml
index 19dce03..e5979b3 100644
--- a/en-US/Progress_Hub_common-para-3.xml
+++ b/en-US/Progress_Hub_common-para-3.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
 %BOOK_ENTITIES;
 ]>
 <para>
-      While the packages are being installed, more configuration is required. Above the installation progress bar is the <guilabel>Root Password</guilabel> menu item. The root password can be configured either while the packages are being installed or afterwards, but you will not be able to complete the installation process until it has been configured. 
+      While the packages are being installed, select the menu items above the progress bar to create user profiles and a root password. These items must be configured in order to complete the installation.
 </para>
 
diff --git a/en-US/firstboot-systemuser.xml b/en-US/firstboot-systemuser.xml
index b1b2401..6cb52c9 100644
--- a/en-US/firstboot-systemuser.xml
+++ b/en-US/firstboot-systemuser.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 <!-- TEXT FROM firstboot.xml -->
 
  <section id="sn-firstboot-systemuser">
-		<title>Create User</title>
+		<title>User Creation</title>
 
 		<para>
 			Create a user account for yourself with this screen. Always use this account to log in to your Fedora system, rather than using the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> account.
@@ -27,13 +27,13 @@
 			Enter a user name and your full name, and then enter your chosen password. Type your password once more in the <guilabel>Confirm Password</guilabel> box to ensure that it is correct. <!-- FIXME Refer to <xref linkend="sn-account_configuration" /> for guidelines on selecting a secure password. -->
 		</para>
 		<para condition="install-guide">
-			Check the <guilabel>Add to Administrators group</guilabel> box if you would like administrative privileges. This will place you in the wheel group, which gives you access to all administrative functions, including installing and updating software, creating and altering configuration files, and administering other users.
+			Check the <guilabel>Make this user administrator</guilabel> box if you would like administrative privileges. This will place you in the wheel group, which gives you access to all administrative functions, including installing and updating software, creating and altering configuration files, and administering other users.
 		</para>
 		<para condition="install-guide">
 			To configure Fedora to use network services for authentication of user information, click <guibutton>Use Network Login</guibutton>. Refer to <xref linkend="sn-firstboot-authentication"/> for further details.
 		</para>
 		<para condition="install-guide">
-		  To create additional users or customise your first user account, click <guibutton>Advanced</guibutton> to open the <application>User Manager</application>.
+			To create additional users or customise your first user account, click <guibutton>Advanced</guibutton> to open the <application>User Manager</application>.
 		</para>
 		
 		<figure float="0" condition="install-guide"><title>User Manager</title>
diff --git a/en-US/firstboot.xml b/en-US/firstboot.xml
index 2a4c784..7dd7bde 100644
--- a/en-US/firstboot.xml
+++ b/en-US/firstboot.xml
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 	
 	<xi:include href="firstboot-license.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	
-	<xi:include href="firstboot-systemuser.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+	<!-- <xi:include href="firstboot-systemuser.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> -->
 	
 	<xi:include href="firstboot-datetime.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	  
diff --git a/en-US/images/firstboot/fb-createuser.png b/en-US/images/firstboot/fb-createuser.png
index 2bab681..7a9a088 100644
Binary files a/en-US/images/firstboot/fb-createuser.png and b/en-US/images/firstboot/fb-createuser.png differ