[install-guide] Updated LVM creation procedure

Jack Reed jjr at fedoraproject.org
Tue May 21 04:30:10 UTC 2013


commit ee427c7948e0f964e1a34ea972d913df02e18062
Author: Jack Reed <jreed at redhat.com>
Date:   Tue May 21 14:30:03 2013 +1000

    Updated LVM creation procedure

 en-US/Create_LVM-x86.xml |   23 +++++++++++++++--------
 1 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Create_LVM-x86.xml b/en-US/Create_LVM-x86.xml
index cdd1f19..ba90e2b 100644
--- a/en-US/Create_LVM-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Create_LVM-x86.xml
@@ -46,19 +46,26 @@
 	  
 	  <step>
 	    <para>
-		 An additional dropdown menu will appear: <guilabel>Volume Group</guilabel>. The menu will display a newly-created volume group name. Either click the menu and select <guilabel>Create a new volume group</guilabel> or click <guibutton>Modify</guibutton> to configure the newly-created volume group, if you need to. If you are happy to accept the volume group the installer has created, skip to step 5.
-	    </para>	      
+		 An additional dropdown menu will appear: <guilabel>Volume Group</guilabel>. The menu will display a newly-created volume group name, such as <guilabel>fedora</guilabel>. If this group and its default settings (no RAID level, automatic sizing) are acceptable, skip to step 5.
+	      </para>
 	  </step>
-	  
+	      
 	  <step>
-	    <para>
-	      Both <guilabel>Create a new volume group</guilabel> and <guibutton>Modify</guibutton> lead to the <guilabel>Configure Volume Group</guilabel> dialog, where you can rename the logical volume group and select which disks will be included. Click <guibutton>Save</guibutton> when the group is configured.
-	    </para>
-	  </step>  
+	      <para>
+		To edit the group, click <guibutton>Modify</guibutton> to open the <guilabel>Configure Volume Group</guilabel> dialog. Choose a name and select which disks will be included. Optionally, select a RAID level and a Sizing Policy (choose between <guilabel>Automatic</guilabel>, <guilabel>As large as possible</guilabel>, and <guilabel>Fixed</guilabel>, to set the size manually). For information on RAID levels, refer to <xref linkend="Create_Software_RAID-x86" />
+	      </para>
+	      <para>
+		Alternatively, click the dropdown menu and select <guilabel>Create a new volume group</guilabel> to add an additional group using the same dialog.
+	      </para>
+
+	      <para>
+		Click <guibutton>Save</guibutton> once the group is configured.
+	      </para>
+	  </step>
 	  
 	  <step>
 	    <para>
-	      Click <guibutton>Apply Changes</guibutton> to save your changes, and either continue with another partition or click <guibutton>Finish Partitioning</guibutton> to return to the Installation Summary Menu.
+	      Click <guibutton>Update Settings</guibutton> to save your changes, and either continue with another partition or click <guibutton>Done</guibutton> to return to the Installation Summary Menu.
 	    </para>
 	  </step>
 	      


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