[system-administrators-guide] Updating the description on how to start Firewall Configuration tool This is the current style for s

stephenw stephenw at fedoraproject.org
Tue Nov 12 09:22:26 UTC 2013


commit ed7bb8e42c1bc9826d6fcae6957fab6f68fd3e95
Author: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley at redhat.com>
Date:   Tue Nov 12 10:06:33 2013 +0100

    Updating the description on how to start Firewall Configuration tool
    This is the current style for starting a GUI application
    en-US/Configuring_NTP_Using_ntpd.xml

 en-US/Configuring_NTP_Using_ntpd.xml |    9 ++++-----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Configuring_NTP_Using_ntpd.xml b/en-US/Configuring_NTP_Using_ntpd.xml
index 40b5a20..c05a1d6 100644
--- a/en-US/Configuring_NTP_Using_ntpd.xml
+++ b/en-US/Configuring_NTP_Using_ntpd.xml
@@ -351,12 +351,11 @@ synchronised to NTP server (10.5.26.10) at stratum 2
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    Check if the firewall is configured to allow incoming <systemitem class="protocol">NTP</systemitem> traffic for clients using the graphical <application>Firewall Configuration</application> tool.</para>
-    <!-- need to check this new part -->
-
+    Check if the firewall is configured to allow incoming <systemitem class="protocol">NTP</systemitem> traffic for clients using the graphical <application>Firewall Configuration</application> tool.
+  </para>
         <para>
-       To start the graphical <application>firewall-config</application> tool, press the super key and start typing <command>firewall</command>. The <guiicon>firewall</guiicon> icon will appear. Press enter once it is highlighted. The <application>firewall-config</application> tool appears. You will be prompted for your user password.</para>
-
+          To start the graphical <application>firewall-config</application> tool, press the <keycap>Super</keycap> key to enter the Activities Overview, type <command>firewall</command> and then press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. The <application>firewall-config</application> tool appears. You will be prompted for your user password.
+        </para>
  <para>
       To start the graphical firewall configuration tool using the command line, enter the following command as root user:
       <screen>~]# <command>firewall-config</command></screen>


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