[release-notes] s/see/refer to/ as per writing guidelines

jfenal jfenal at fedoraproject.org
Wed Oct 23 13:12:52 UTC 2013


commit 82bb70effe999d1eb811f5052101ed2177bf022e
Author: Jérôme Fenal <jfenal at free.fr>
Date:   Wed Oct 23 15:12:18 2013 +0200

    s/see/refer to/ as per writing guidelines

 en-US/Database_Servers.xml |    2 +-
 en-US/Development.xml      |    2 +-
 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Database_Servers.xml b/en-US/Database_Servers.xml
index 4a4395a..87e8b23 100644
--- a/en-US/Database_Servers.xml
+++ b/en-US/Database_Servers.xml
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
       <primary>Hadoop</primary>
     </indexterm>
     <para>
-      Fedora 20 offers the core of the thriving <productname>Hadoop</productname> platform and many related packages. For a detailed review of Hadoop in Fedora, see <ulink url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Changes/Hadoop" />
+      Fedora 20 offers the core of the thriving <productname>Hadoop</productname> platform and many related packages. For a detailed review of Hadoop in Fedora, refer to <ulink url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Changes/Hadoop" />
     </para>
   </section>
     
diff --git a/en-US/Development.xml b/en-US/Development.xml
index 001e150..6bb725a 100644
--- a/en-US/Development.xml
+++ b/en-US/Development.xml
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@
       The version of the <productname>python-setuptools</productname> package has been updated to the 0.9.x series. This release series merges the <literal>setuptools</literal> and <literal>distribute</literal> upstream projects which has introduced a variety of changes to the API and behavior.
     </para>
     <para>
-      Because this change is mostly compatible with the previous version, it should not impair any Python packages in the Fedora. If you are writing or deploying other Python software you suspect may be affected, please see <ulink url="http://pythonhosted.org/setuptools/merge.html" /> and <ulink url="https://pypi.python.org/pypi/setuptools#changes" /> for more details. 
+      Because this change is mostly compatible with the previous version, it should not impair any Python packages in the Fedora. If you are writing or deploying other Python software you suspect may be affected, please refer to <ulink url="http://pythonhosted.org/setuptools/merge.html" /> and <ulink url="https://pypi.python.org/pypi/setuptools#changes" /> for more details. 
     </para>
   </section>
 


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