[release-notes] patch from BZ#1021342, thanks Yuri!

[Pete Travis]

commit 74a46cd7eaf3e498f3d7d0fd3291fd020c456fd7
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Tue Oct 29 19:49:09 2013 -0600

    patch from BZ#1021342, thanks Yuri!

 en-US/Desktop.xml |    6 +++---
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Desktop.xml b/en-US/Desktop.xml
index c7a98ff..902ce00 100644
--- a/en-US/Desktop.xml
+++ b/en-US/Desktop.xml
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
       Fedora 20 offers the newest version of <productname>Enlightenment</productname>. After over a decade of upstream development, the Enlightenment project has released the <productname>E17</productname> desktop shell, a window manager and supporting suite of libraries. It can be configured as a fast, spartan window manager or as a visually appealing desktop environment with ample eye candy.
     </para>
     <para>
-      <productname>Enlightenment</productname> can be installed with the command <command>yum install @enlightenment</command> and used by choosing it at login.To learn more, read <ulink url="http://www.enlightenment.org/p.php?p=about&amp;l=en" />
+      <productname>Enlightenment</productname> can be installed with the command <command>yum install @enlightenment</command> and used by choosing it at login. To learn more, read <ulink url="http://www.enlightenment.org/p.php?p=about&amp;l=en" />
       </para>
   </section>
 	
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@
 	  <productname>GNOME</productname> in Fedora will offer a new, visually appealing application for browsing and installing applications. <application>GNOME Software</application> shows information relevant to users, such as descriptions, screenshots, reviews and more.
 	</para>
 	<para>
-	  Applications describe themselves to <application>Software</application> and other supporting tools using the <ulink url="http://people.freedesktop.org/~hughsient/appdata/" > AppData Specification</ulink>  In support of this functionality, Fedora contributors have combined their efforts to offer assistance and patches for AppData support in upstream projects.  
+	  Applications describe themselves to <application>Software</application> and other supporting tools using the <ulink url="http://people.freedesktop.org/~hughsient/appdata/" >AppData Specification</ulink>.  In support of this functionality, Fedora contributors have combined their efforts to offer assistance and patches for AppData support to upstream projects.  
 	</para>
 	<para>
 	  The older package management GUI, gpk-application, is still available.
@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@
 	The <productname>KDE Desktop Environment</productname> will use <application>SDDM</application> instead of <application>KDM</application> as the designated display and login manager. <application>SDDM</application> is the successor to <application>KDM</application>, and adds support for <function>QtQuick</function> themes.
       </para>
       <para>
-	Some features may initially be missing from <application>SDDM</application>, such as VNC or multiseat support However, the <application>SDDM</application> development community is very active and regular additions to functionality are expected.
+	Some features may initially be missing from <application>SDDM</application>, such as VNC or multiseat support. However, the <application>SDDM</application> development community is very active and regular additions to functionality are expected.
       </para>
       <para>
 	<application>KDM</application>, the previous display manager, is still available from the Fedora repositories. Install it with the command <command>yum install kdm</command> and enable with the command <command>systemctl enable --force kdm.service</command>