[system-administrators-guide] Improving the language

[stephenw]

commit 1975ebd8a4ba080307675aa6ea7ed1f7bd8982a9
Author: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley at redhat.com>
Date:   Wed Oct 30 20:45:28 2013 +0100

    Improving the language

 en-US/Preface.xml                     |    8 ++++----
 en-US/System_Administrators_Guide.xml |    2 +-
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Preface.xml b/en-US/Preface.xml
index fe0add4..5a14469 100644
--- a/en-US/Preface.xml
+++ b/en-US/Preface.xml
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        Easily working with kernel modules and upgrading the kernel
+        Working with kernel modules and upgrading the kernel
       </para>
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
         <term><xref linkend="part-Infrastructure_Services" /></term>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            This part provides information how to configure services and daemons, configure authentication, and enable remote logins.
+            This part provides information on how to configure services and daemons, configure authentication, and enable remote logins.
           </para>
           <para>
             <xref linkend="ch-Services_and_Daemons" /> covers the configuration of the services to be run when a system is started, and provides information on how to start, stop, and restart the services on the command line using the <command>systemctl</command> utility. 
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@
             <xref linkend="ch-abrt" /> concentrates on <application>ABRT</application>, a system service and a set of tools to collect crash data and send a report to the relevant issue tracker. Read this chapter to learn how to use <application>ABRT</application> on your system.
           </para>
           <para>
-            <xref linkend="ch-OProfile" /> covers <application>OProfile</application>, a low overhead, system-wide performance monitoring tool. Read this chapter for information how to use <application>OProfile</application> on your system.
+            <xref linkend="ch-OProfile" /> covers <application>OProfile</application>, a low overhead, system-wide performance monitoring tool. Read this chapter for information on how to use <application>OProfile</application> on your system.
           </para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@
             This part covers various tools that assist administrators with kernel customization.
           </para>
           <para>
-            <xref linkend="ch-Manually_Upgrading_the_Kernel" /> provides important information how to manually update a kernel package using the <command>rpm</command> command instead of <command>yum</command>. Read this chapter if you cannot update a kernel package with the <application>Yum</application> package manager.
+            <xref linkend="ch-Manually_Upgrading_the_Kernel" /> provides important information on how to manually update a kernel package using the <command>rpm</command> command instead of <command>yum</command>. Read this chapter if you cannot update a kernel package with the <application>Yum</application> package manager.
           </para>
           <para>
             <xref linkend="ch-Working_with_Kernel_Modules" /> explains how to display, query, load, and unload kernel modules and their dependencies, and how to set module parameters. Additionally, it covers specific kernel module capabilities such as using multiple Ethernet cards and using channel bonding. Read this chapter if you need to work with kernel modules.
diff --git a/en-US/System_Administrators_Guide.xml b/en-US/System_Administrators_Guide.xml
index 646459b..4f4ca8b 100644
--- a/en-US/System_Administrators_Guide.xml
+++ b/en-US/System_Administrators_Guide.xml
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
     <title>Infrastructure Services</title>
     <partintro>
       <para>
-        This part provides information how to configure services and daemons, configure authentication, and enable remote logins.
+        This part provides information on how to configure services and daemons, configure authentication, and enable remote logins.
       </para>
     </partintro>
     <xi:include href="Services_and_Daemons.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />