[release-notes] Added more info to Server Roles section

Zach Oglesby zoglesby at fedoraproject.org
Sat Dec 6 17:05:35 UTC 2014


commit c043ca5ceabfc913462a6bcfdf97930215d958ad
Author: Zach Oglesby <zach at oglesby.co>
Date:   Sat Dec 6 12:05:23 2014 -0500

    Added more info to Server Roles section

 en-US/Products-Server.xml |   10 +++++++---
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Products-Server.xml b/en-US/Products-Server.xml
index 04cbec4..cdd1c16 100644
--- a/en-US/Products-Server.xml
+++ b/en-US/Products-Server.xml
@@ -9,10 +9,15 @@
     
     <section id="server-roles">
         <title>Fedora Server Roles</title>
-        
+        <para>
+	  A Featured Server role is an installable component of Fedora Server that provides a well-integrated service on top of the Fedora Server platform. These prepared roles simplify deployment and management of a service compared to setting up an upstream server from scratch; their use is recommended but optional; existing users of upstream servers based on Fedora RPMs will not be impeded.
+	</para>
         <section id="Framework-for-Server-Role-Deployment">
             <title>Framework for Server Role Deployment</title>
-            <para>
+	    <para>
+	      A new D-Bus service is available, exposing available server roles, and  making it possible to deploy, configure and manage them. Appropriate functionality will also be exposed as a command-line utility.
+	    </para>
+	    <para>
                 <ulink url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Changes/FrameworkForServerRoleDeployment" />
             </para>
         </section>
@@ -26,7 +31,6 @@
                 When combined with SSSD, complex tasks such as single-sign-on and authenticated access to network resources is easily accomplished.
             </para>
         </section>
-        
     </section>
         
     <section id="Cockpit-Management-Console">


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