[install-guide/f21-branch] Adding a screenshot to text mode + removing additional TODOs
pbokoc
pbokoc at fedoraproject.org
Sun Dec 7 19:55:06 UTC 2014
commit aa925b7ccea1ed2f306560ca9f2c0f62ea58891f
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc at redhat.com>
Date: Sun Dec 7 20:54:26 2014 +0100
Adding a screenshot to text mode + removing additional TODOs
en-US/CustomSpoke_PartitioningAdvice.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Installing_Using_Anaconda.xml | 16 +++++++++++++---
en-US/Kickstart_Installations.xml | 2 +-
en-US/images/anaconda/SummaryHub_TextMode.png | Bin 0 -> 64809 bytes
4 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke_PartitioningAdvice.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke_PartitioningAdvice.xml
index b453371..4e8c6ca 100644
--- a/en-US/CustomSpoke_PartitioningAdvice.xml
+++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke_PartitioningAdvice.xml
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- If you need to make any changes to your storage configuration after the installation, &PRODUCT; repositories offer several different tools which can help you do this. If you prefer a command line tool, try <package>system-storage-manager</package>. <remark>TODO: recommend a GUI tool? blivet-gui, maybe?</remark>
+ If you need to make any changes to your storage configuration after the installation, &PRODUCT; repositories offer several different tools which can help you do this. If you prefer a command line tool, try <package>system-storage-manager</package>.
</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
diff --git a/en-US/Installing_Using_Anaconda.xml b/en-US/Installing_Using_Anaconda.xml
index f3924b3..47dbae5 100644
--- a/en-US/Installing_Using_Anaconda.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installing_Using_Anaconda.xml
@@ -154,9 +154,19 @@
<para>
There are two alternatives to text mode which can both be used even if the installation system does not have a graphical display. You can either connect to the installation system using VNC and perform an interactive graphical installation remotely (see <xref linkend="chap-vnc-installations" />), or you can create a Kickstart file to perform the installation automatically (see <xref linkend="chap-kickstart-installations" />).
</para>
- <para>
- <remark>TODO: screen of text mode hub</remark>
- </para>
+ <figure>
+ <title>Text Mode Installation</title>
+ <mediaobject>
+ <imageobject>
+ <imagedata fileref="images/anaconda/SummaryHub_TextMode.png" format="PNG" scalefit="0" />
+ </imageobject>
+ <textobject>
+ <para>
+ The main menu in during a text-based installation.
+ </para>
+ </textobject>
+ </mediaobject>
+ </figure>
<para>
Installation in text mode follows a pattern similar to the graphical installation: There is no single fixed progression; you can configure many settings in any order you want using the main status screen. Screens which have already been configured, either automatically or by you, are marked as <literal>[x]</literal>, and screens which require your attention before the installation can begin are marked with <literal>[!]</literal>. Available commands are displayed below the list of available options.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Kickstart_Installations.xml b/en-US/Kickstart_Installations.xml
index 2fc9c5f..f124930 100644
--- a/en-US/Kickstart_Installations.xml
+++ b/en-US/Kickstart_Installations.xml
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@
Normally, a Kickstart file is copied to removable media or a hard drive, or made available on the network. Placing the file in a network location complements the usual approach to Kickstart installations, which is also network-based: the system is booted using a PXE server, the Kickstart file is downloaded from a network share, and software packages specified in the file are downloaded from remote repositories.
</para>
<para>
- <remark>TODO: link this with the PXE chapter, and maybe provide a procedure about how to create a new partition on a bootable USB with a netinst iso and put a Kickstart on it</remark>
+ <xref linkend=chap-pxe-server-setup"" /> offers some additional information about preparing for a network-based installation.
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/images/anaconda/SummaryHub_TextMode.png b/en-US/images/anaconda/SummaryHub_TextMode.png
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..be0ea51
Binary files /dev/null and b/en-US/images/anaconda/SummaryHub_TextMode.png differ
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