[install-guide/f21-branch] Adding a screenshot to text mode + removing additional TODOs

pbokoc pbokoc at fedoraproject.org
Sun Dec 7 19:55:06 UTC 2014


commit aa925b7ccea1ed2f306560ca9f2c0f62ea58891f
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc at redhat.com>
Date:   Sun Dec 7 20:54:26 2014 +0100

    Adding a screenshot to text mode + removing additional TODOs

 en-US/CustomSpoke_PartitioningAdvice.xml      |    2 +-
 en-US/Installing_Using_Anaconda.xml           |   16 +++++++++++++---
 en-US/Kickstart_Installations.xml             |    2 +-
 en-US/images/anaconda/SummaryHub_TextMode.png |  Bin 0 -> 64809 bytes
 4 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke_PartitioningAdvice.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke_PartitioningAdvice.xml
index b453371..4e8c6ca 100644
--- a/en-US/CustomSpoke_PartitioningAdvice.xml
+++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke_PartitioningAdvice.xml
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
             <para>
-                If you need to make any changes to your storage configuration after the installation, &PRODUCT; repositories offer several different tools which can help you do this. If you prefer a command line tool, try <package>system-storage-manager</package>. <remark>TODO: recommend a GUI tool? blivet-gui, maybe?</remark>
+                If you need to make any changes to your storage configuration after the installation, &PRODUCT; repositories offer several different tools which can help you do this. If you prefer a command line tool, try <package>system-storage-manager</package>.
             </para>
         </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
diff --git a/en-US/Installing_Using_Anaconda.xml b/en-US/Installing_Using_Anaconda.xml
index f3924b3..47dbae5 100644
--- a/en-US/Installing_Using_Anaconda.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installing_Using_Anaconda.xml
@@ -154,9 +154,19 @@
 		<para>
 			There are two alternatives to text mode which can both be used even if the installation system does not have a graphical display. You can either connect to the installation system using VNC and perform an interactive graphical installation remotely (see <xref linkend="chap-vnc-installations" />), or you can create a Kickstart file to perform the installation automatically (see <xref linkend="chap-kickstart-installations" />).
 		</para>
-		<para>
-			<remark>TODO: screen of text mode hub</remark>
-		</para>
+		<figure>
+		<title>Text Mode Installation</title>
+		<mediaobject>
+			<imageobject>
+				<imagedata fileref="images/anaconda/SummaryHub_TextMode.png" format="PNG" scalefit="0" />
+			</imageobject>
+			<textobject>
+				<para>
+					The main menu in during a text-based installation.
+				</para>
+			</textobject>
+		</mediaobject>
+	</figure>
 		<para>
 			Installation in text mode follows a pattern similar to the graphical installation: There is no single fixed progression; you can configure many settings in any order you want using the main status screen. Screens which have already been configured, either automatically or by you, are marked as <literal>[x]</literal>, and screens which require your attention before the installation can begin are marked with <literal>[!]</literal>. Available commands are displayed below the list of available options.
 		</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Kickstart_Installations.xml b/en-US/Kickstart_Installations.xml
index 2fc9c5f..f124930 100644
--- a/en-US/Kickstart_Installations.xml
+++ b/en-US/Kickstart_Installations.xml
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@
                 Normally, a Kickstart file is copied to removable media or a hard drive, or made available on the network. Placing the file in a network location complements the usual approach to Kickstart installations, which is also network-based: the system is booted using a PXE server, the Kickstart file is downloaded from a network share, and software packages specified in the file are downloaded from remote repositories.
             </para>
             <para>
-                <remark>TODO: link this with the PXE chapter, and maybe provide a procedure about how to create a new partition on a bootable USB with a netinst iso and put a Kickstart on it</remark>
+                <xref linkend=chap-pxe-server-setup"" /> offers some additional information about preparing for a network-based installation.
             </para>
         </section>
 
diff --git a/en-US/images/anaconda/SummaryHub_TextMode.png b/en-US/images/anaconda/SummaryHub_TextMode.png
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..be0ea51
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