[securityguide] Changed some wording around the IPSec portion of the VPN section.
Eric Christensen
sparks at fedoraproject.org
Wed Jun 11 20:04:23 UTC 2014
commit 193f1e699ca32d9ca33bbed4e0de0cda95b5e196
Author: Eric H Christensen <sparks at redhat.com>
Date: Wed Jun 11 16:04:10 2014 -0400
Changed some wording around the IPSec portion of the VPN section.
en-US/VPN.xml | 4 ++--
1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/VPN.xml b/en-US/VPN.xml
index 1cf796a..42e9c99 100644
--- a/en-US/VPN.xml
+++ b/en-US/VPN.xml
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
<section id="sect-Security_Guide-Virtual_Private_Networks_VPNs-VPNs_and_PROD">
<title>VPNs and &PRODUCT;</title>
<para>
- &PRODUCT; provides various options in terms of implementing a software solution to securely connect to a <acronym>WAN</acronym>. <firstterm>Internet Protocol Security</firstterm> (<acronym>IPsec</acronym>) is the supported <abbrev>VPN</abbrev> implementation for &PRODUCT;, and sufficiently addresses the usability needs of organizations with branch offices or remote users.
+ &PRODUCT; provides various options in terms of implementing a software solution to securely communicating across a <acronym>WAN</acronym>. One option available within &PRODUCT; is <firstterm>Internet Protocol Security</firstterm> (<acronym>IPsec</acronym>) which does a good job of addressing the usability needs of many organizations. Another option is <firstterm>OpenVPN</firstterm> which has functionality built into GNOME's Network Manager.
</para>
</section>
@@ -41,7 +41,6 @@
<para>
The <abbrev>IPsec</abbrev> implementation in &PRODUCT; uses <firstterm>Internet Key Exchange</firstterm> (<firstterm>IKE</firstterm>), a protocol implemented by the Internet Engineering Task Force (<acronym>IETF</acronym>), used for mutual authentication and secure associations between connecting systems.
</para>
- </section>
<section id="sect-Security_Guide-Virtual_Private_Networks_VPNs-Creating_an_IPsec_Connection">
<title>Creating an <abbrev>IPsec</abbrev> Connection</title>
@@ -945,6 +944,7 @@ include "/etc/racoon/<replaceable>X.X.X.X</replaceable>.conf"</screen>
</para>
<screen>[root at myServer ~] # /sbin/ifdown <replaceable><nickname></replaceable></screen>
</section>
+ </section>
</section>
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