[networking-guide] master: improve markup (168ba8c)
stephenw at fedoraproject.org
stephenw at fedoraproject.org
Fri Mar 21 14:38:52 UTC 2014
Repository : http://git.fedorahosted.org/cgit/docs/networking-guide.git
On branch : master
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commit 168ba8cf4981a7419b5cfe358e05e0b42b3fb8ec
Author: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley at redhat.com>
Date: Fri Mar 21 15:26:21 2014 +0100
improve markup
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en-US/Configure_Networking.xml | 4 ++--
1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
diff --git a/en-US/Configure_Networking.xml b/en-US/Configure_Networking.xml
index 6761fe7..6a6db54 100644
--- a/en-US/Configure_Networking.xml
+++ b/en-US/Configure_Networking.xml
@@ -1177,7 +1177,7 @@
<guilabel>PAC file</guilabel>
</term>
<listitem>
- <para>Click to browse for, and select, PAC file.</para>
+ <para>Click to browse for, and select, a <firstterm>protected access credential</firstterm> (<acronym>PAC</acronym>) file.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
@@ -1496,7 +1496,7 @@
<para>
<guimenuitem>Automatic, addresses only</guimenuitem> — Choose this option if the network you are connecting to uses a <systemitem class="protocol">DHCP</systemitem> server to assign <systemitem class="protocol">IP</systemitem> addresses but you want to assign <systemitem class="protocol">DNS</systemitem> servers manually.</para>
<para>
- <guimenuitem>Automatic, DHCP only</guimenuitem> — Choose this option to not use RA, but request information from <systemitem class="protocol">DHCPv6</systemitem> directly to create a stateful configuration.</para>
+ <guimenuitem>Automatic, DHCP only</guimenuitem> — Choose this option to not use RA, but request information from DHCPv6 directly to create a stateful configuration.</para>
<para>
<guimenuitem>Manual</guimenuitem> — Choose this option if the network you are connecting to does not have a <systemitem class="protocol">DHCP</systemitem> server and you want to assign <systemitem class="protocol">IP</systemitem> addresses manually.</para>
<para>
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