[networking-guide] master: improve markup (168ba8c)

stephenw at fedoraproject.org stephenw at fedoraproject.org
Fri Mar 21 14:38:52 UTC 2014


Repository : http://git.fedorahosted.org/cgit/docs/networking-guide.git

On branch  : master

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commit 168ba8cf4981a7419b5cfe358e05e0b42b3fb8ec
Author: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley at redhat.com>
Date:   Fri Mar 21 15:26:21 2014 +0100

    improve markup


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 en-US/Configure_Networking.xml |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en-US/Configure_Networking.xml b/en-US/Configure_Networking.xml
index 6761fe7..6a6db54 100644
--- a/en-US/Configure_Networking.xml
+++ b/en-US/Configure_Networking.xml
@@ -1177,7 +1177,7 @@
               <guilabel>PAC file</guilabel>
             </term>
             <listitem>
-              <para>Click to browse for, and select, PAC file.</para>
+              <para>Click to browse for, and select, a <firstterm>protected access credential</firstterm> (<acronym>PAC</acronym>) file.</para>
             </listitem>
           </varlistentry>
           <varlistentry>
@@ -1496,7 +1496,7 @@
             <para>
               <guimenuitem>Automatic, addresses only</guimenuitem> — Choose this option if the network you are connecting to uses a <systemitem class="protocol">DHCP</systemitem> server to assign <systemitem class="protocol">IP</systemitem> addresses but you want to assign <systemitem class="protocol">DNS</systemitem> servers manually.</para>
             <para>
-              <guimenuitem>Automatic, DHCP only</guimenuitem> — Choose this option to not use RA, but request information from <systemitem class="protocol">DHCPv6</systemitem> directly to create a stateful configuration.</para>
+              <guimenuitem>Automatic, DHCP only</guimenuitem> — Choose this option to not use RA, but request information from DHCPv6 directly to create a stateful configuration.</para>
             <para>
               <guimenuitem>Manual</guimenuitem> — Choose this option if the network you are connecting to does not have a <systemitem class="protocol">DHCP</systemitem> server and you want to assign <systemitem class="protocol">IP</systemitem> addresses manually.</para>
             <para>



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