[install-guide] Updating description of logvol --recommended in Kickstart

pbokoc pbokoc at fedoraproject.org
Fri Oct 31 15:52:03 UTC 2014


commit 2116a18238640a45132c1d7b0c6a86faff8ed73e
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc at redhat.com>
Date:   Fri Oct 31 16:57:21 2014 +0100

    Updating description of logvol --recommended in Kickstart

 en-US/Kickstart_Syntax_Reference.xml |    5 +----
 1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Kickstart_Syntax_Reference.xml b/en-US/Kickstart_Syntax_Reference.xml
index 0901a9d..3d8bd93 100644
--- a/en-US/Kickstart_Syntax_Reference.xml
+++ b/en-US/Kickstart_Syntax_Reference.xml
@@ -1106,9 +1106,6 @@
 <literal>swap --recommended</literal>
                                     </programlisting>
                                     <para>
-                                        The size assigned will be effective but not precisely calibrated for your system.
-                                    </para>
-                                    <para>
                                         To determine the size of the swap partition automatically but also allow extra space for your system to hibernate, use the <option>--hibernation</option> option:
                                     </para>
                                     <programlisting>
@@ -1204,7 +1201,7 @@
                     <term><option>--recommended</option></term>
                     <listitem>
                         <para>
-                            Determine the size of the logical volume automatically. For details about the recommended scheme, see <remark>TODO: xref to section with partitioning recommendations</remark>
+                            Use this option when creating a <systemitem>swap</systemitem> logical volume to determine the size of this volume automatically, based on your system's hardware. For details about the recommended scheme, see <remark>TODO: xref to section with partitioning recommendations</remark>
                         </para>
                     </listitem>
                 </varlistentry>


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