[install-guide/F21-rewrite] Some better phrasing in Troubleshooting

pbokoc pbokoc at fedoraproject.org
Sat Sep 13 19:13:27 UTC 2014


commit 8ac1b3b2ca51f1104af0640fa9fdb70c9667632d
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc at redhat.com>
Date:   Sat Sep 13 21:12:19 2014 +0200

    Some better phrasing in Troubleshooting

 en-US/Troubleshooting.xml |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Troubleshooting.xml b/en-US/Troubleshooting.xml
index 45a01d8..21531c7 100644
--- a/en-US/Troubleshooting.xml
+++ b/en-US/Troubleshooting.xml
@@ -39,14 +39,14 @@
         </itemizedlist>
         <note>
             <para>
-                The above list is by no means complete - you can find help in many other places as well. You can find additional information about available resources such as IRC channels and mailing lists at <ulink url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Communicating_and_getting_help" />.
+                The above list is by no means complete - you can find help in many other places as well. Additional information about available resources such as IRC channels and mailing lists is available at <ulink url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Communicating_and_getting_help" />.
             </para>
         </note>
         <para>
             Before you open a new discussion or ask anyone for help on IRC, you should always do some research on your own. If you are encountering an issue, there is usually a good chance that someone else ran into the same problem before you and published a solution somewhere. Opening a discussion about something already explained elsewhere, or asking a common question which has been answered many times before, is not likely to result in a friendly, constructive response.
         </para>
         <para>
-            When troubleshooting issues related to the installation, you might be asked to provide log files. The sections below explains which log files are generated during the installation and how to obtain them.
+            When you ask for help troubleshooting problems related to the installation, you may be asked to provide log files generated by the installer. The sections below explain which files are generated, what their contents are, and how to transfer them from the installation system.
         </para>
 
         <section id="sect-troubleshooting-log-files">


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