[accessibility-guide] Update the desktops section

Ben Cotton bcotton at fedoraproject.org
Sat Apr 11 02:26:44 UTC 2015


commit 988feb507f39861358689898c4757ac1887bade8
Author: Ben Cotton <bcotton at funnelfiasco.com>
Date:   Fri Apr 10 22:22:56 2015 -0400

    Update the desktops section

 en-US/Desktops.xml |    7 +++----
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/Desktops.xml b/en-US/Desktops.xml
index 8784338..a72f40d 100644
--- a/en-US/Desktops.xml
+++ b/en-US/Desktops.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 		<para>Certain desktops have their own internal settings that can help with accessibility.</para>
 	<section>
 		<title>KDE</title>
-			<para>In KDE, keyboard and mouse settings can be configured in kcontrol. These settings are available by selecting <menuchoice><guilabel>Personalization &gt; Accessibility</guilabel></menuchoice>.  Additional information on Accessibility Tools in KDE can be found at <ulink url="http://accessibility.kde.org/"></ulink></para>
+			<para>In KDE, keyboard and mouse settings can be configured in kcontrol. These settings are available by selecting <menuchoice><guimenu>Personalization</guimenu><guimenuitem>Accessibility</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.  Additional information on Accessibility Tools in KDE can be found at <ulink url="http://accessibility.kde.org/"></ulink></para>
 	</section>
 	<section>
 		<title>GNOME</title>
@@ -14,13 +14,12 @@
 	</section>
 	<section>
 		<title>XFCE</title>
-			<para>In XFCE, accessibility options for the keyboard and mouse can be configured in the Accessibility Settings dialogue. To access these settings from the graphical menus, select <menuchoice><guilabel>Preferences &gt; Accessibility</guilabel></menuchoice>. Alternative keyboard configurations, such as keyboard shortcuts, can be set by selecting <menuchoice><guilabel>Preferences &gt; Keyboard</guilabel></menuchoice>. Similarly, extra mouse related settings are available by selecting <menuchoice><guilabel>Preferences &gt; Mouse</guilabel></menuchoice>. Some minor additional accessibility options for XFCE can be found through <menuchoice><guilabel>Preferences &gt; Window Manager Tweaks</guilabel></menuchoice>.</para> 
+			<para>In XFCE, accessibility options for the keyboard and mouse can be configured in the Accessibility Settings dialogue. To access these settings from the graphical menus, select <menuchoice><guimenu>Preferences</guimenu><guimenuitem>Accessibility</guilabel></menuchoice>. Alternative keyboard configurations, such as keyboard shortcuts, can be set by selecting <menuchoice><guimenu>Preferences</guimenu><guimenuitem>Keyboard</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. Similarly, extra mouse related settings are available by selecting <menuchoice><guimenu>Preferences</guimenu><guimenuitem>Mouse</guimenu></menuchoice>. Some minor additional accessibility options for XFCE can be found through <menuchoice><guimenu>Preferences</guimenu><guimenuitem>Window Manager Tweaks</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.</para> 
 	</section>
 	<section>
 		<title>Sugar: Making computing accessible for children.</title>
 			<para>The <package>Sugar Learning Platform</package> is an innovative learning interface for children, which encourages learning, critical thinking, and creativity. <package>Sugar</package> was originally created for the OLPC (One Laptop Per Child) initiative. The traditional "office-desktop" style computer interface can be quite intimidating and is often not very accessible for children who are learning to read and write. <package>Sugar</package> offers an alternative, more child-friendly approach to learning and computing.</para>
-			<para>To install the <package>Sugar</package> platform in fedora, you can either select <menuchoice><guilabel>System &gt; Administration &gt; Add/Remove Software</guilabel></menuchoice> on the GNOME panel, and then type <package>sugar</package> in the screen that pops up; or alternatively type <command>su -c "yum install sugar"</command> in a terminal. There is also an alternate version of Fedora featuring the Sugar Platform, known as <package>Sugar on a Stick</package> It is available at <ulink url="http://spins.fedoraproject.org/soas/"></ulink></para>
-			<para>Various <package>Sugar Activities</package> are also available through the Fedora package repositories. To browse the available sugar activities through the GNOME package manager, select <menuchoice><guilabel>System > Administration > Add/Remove Software</guilabel></menuchoice> on the GNOME panel, and then type <command>sugar-</command> in the screen that pops up; you will be presented with a list of packages relating to <package>Sugar</package>. Alternatively, type <command>su -c "yum install sugar-"</command> in a terminal window.</para>
+			<para>To install the <package>Sugar</package> platform in Fedora, you can either select <menuchoice><guimenu>System</guimenu><guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Add/Remove Software</guimenuitem></menuchoice> on the GNOME panel, and then type <package>sugar</package> in the screen that pops up; or alternatively type <command>su -c "dnf install sugar"</command> in a terminal.</para>
 			<para>More information on <package>Sugar</package> for learners, parents, teachers, and contributors can be found at the official website, <ulink url="http://sugarlabs.org/"></ulink></para>
 
 	</section>


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