[Bug 982656] New: A couple of suggestions for 9.17. Installation Complete

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https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=982656

            Bug ID: 982656
           Summary: A couple of suggestions for 9.17. Installation
                    Complete
           Product: Fedora Documentation
           Version: devel
         Component: install-guide
          Keywords: Documentation
          Severity: unspecified
          Priority: unspecified
          Assignee: pbokoc at redhat.com
          Reporter: pkovar at redhat.com
        QA Contact: docs-qa at lists.fedoraproject.org
                CC: oglesbyzm at gmail.com, pbokoc at redhat.com

Hey Petr, 

Just a couple of suggestions for section 9.17. Installation Complete

"Now that you have configured the remaining settings, your Fedora installation
is now complete!" --> "Now that you have configured the remaining settings,
your Fedora installation is complete."

"9.17.1. Initial Setup in GNOME" --> GNOME Initial Setup

"haven't" --> "have not"

"The Initial Setup application is only available for GNOME."

This might need some rewording since we now have two initial setup apps in
Fedora (http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/NewFirstboot,
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/InitialExperience) that do almost the
same thing, but target different DEs.

"create an user account" -->  "create a user account"

"After you are finished configuring" --> "After you have finished configuring"

"On the first login, the Gnome Help application will automatically open"

The application is called Yelp, not Gnome Help. However, you probably just want
to mention that "GNOME Help will automatically open...".

"Figure 9.40. Language selection in Gnome Initial Setup" --> "Language
selection in GNOME Initial Setup"

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