[Bug 962869] New: Some Textual improvements and a typographical correction

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Product: Fedora Documentation
https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=962869

            Bug ID: 962869
           Summary: Some Textual improvements and a typographical
                    correction
           Product: Fedora Documentation
           Version: devel
         Component: release-notes
          Severity: unspecified
          Priority: unspecified
          Assignee: relnotes at fedoraproject.org
          Reporter: lsatenstein at yahoo.com
        QA Contact: docs-qa at lists.fedoraproject.org
                CC: oglesbyzm at gmail.com, wb8rcr at arrl.net
          Category: ---

Created attachment 747746
  --> https://bugzilla.redhat.com/attachment.cgi?id=747746&action=edit
ODT format markup of the first page of the release notes.

Provide details here.  Do not change the blocking bug.

First page of the F19 release notes.

I have a markup document. 
I rephrased some text and corrected errors.

I can do before/after here, so please advise how better to proceed.

Before

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After
You can help the Fedora Project community continue to improve Fedora by filing
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Please review the attachment.  Yellow hightlighted text means no change.

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