[Bug 962869] Some Textual improvements and a typographical correction

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Product: Fedora Documentation
https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=962869

Pete Travis <me at petetravis.com> changed:

           What    |Removed                     |Added
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             Status|ON_QA                       |CLOSED
         Resolution|---                         |WORKSFORME
        Last Closed|                            |2013-05-19 14:12:13

--- Comment #4 from Pete Travis <me at petetravis.com> ---
Leslie,

I've glanced over the latest attachment. A number of the copy changes in this
and previous attachments appear to be for personal preference in phrasing,
adding no value to the copy and often degrading the technical accuracy of the
work.  

I appreciate your willingness to review, but the method used actually requires
more time to identify the changes presented and consider their value than the
time it would take for a writer to review the actual copy.  When the changes
identified do not improve the original work, this time is wasted.

I hope we can work together to improve the effectiveness of your contributions.
It is important to have QA and proofreading of our docs.

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