[Bug 1255542] New: Improve first opening Introduction paragrph of Selinux Users and Admistrator Guide

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https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1255542

            Bug ID: 1255542
           Summary: Improve first opening Introduction paragrph of Selinux
                    Users and Admistrator Guide
           Product: Fedora Documentation
           Version: devel
         Component: security-guide
          Assignee: sparks at redhat.com
          Reporter: lsatenstein at yahoo.com
        QA Contact: docs-qa at lists.fedoraproject.org
                CC: pkennedy at redhat.com, security-guide-list at redhat.com,
                    sparks at redhat.com, zach at oglesby.co



Description of problem:
Paragraph reads

Security-Enhanced Linux (SELinux) is an implementation of a mandatory access
control mechanism in the Linux kernel, checking for allowed operations after
standard discretionary access controls are checked. It was created by the
National Security Agency and can enforce rules on files and processes in a
Linux system, and on their actions, based on defined policies. 

Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable):


How reproducible:

What is the difference in meaning between checked and approved and validated?
Should this introduction read...

Security-Enhanced Linux (SELinux) is an implementation of a mandatory access
control mechanism in the Linux kernel, allowing approved operations after
standard discretionary access controls are validated. It was created by the
National Security Agency and can enforce rules on files and processes in a
Linux system, and on their actions, based on defined policies. 



Steps to Reproduce:
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Actual results:

Checking does not mean acceptance or refusal.  Suggest the replacement text.

Expected results:


Additional info:

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