Comment about Installation

[Christopher Antila]

Leslie:

It looks like you found some areas that could certainly use improvement!
If you would please report these issues on Bugzilla, with "Fedora
Documentation" as the product and "installation-guide" as the component,
we could track the revisions in the customary Docs Project way.
Reporting issues by email alone means they are more likely to be forgotten.


Thanks,
Christopher

On 08/24/2013 10:05 PM, Leslie S Satenstein wrote:
> 
> I noted the following
> 
> 
>  http://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/Fedora/19/html/Installation_Guide/s1-pkgselection-x86.html
> 
> 
>     Note
> 
> Only one desktop environment can be selected at install time. To install
> additional environments once Fedora is installed, use the *Software*
> tool or the |yum groupinstall| command.
> 
> 
> 
> I do not recall a previous mention of yum in this guide. We who are
> familiar with Fedora know yum as the command line system software tool
> that accompanies Fedora.  Perhaps we need to elaborate with a footnote,
> about yum and where to fetch the yum documentation.
> 
> 
> 
>  
> Regards
> *
>  Leslie
> *
> *Mr. Leslie Satenstein
> *An experienced Information Technology specialist.
> Yesterday was a good day, today is a better day,
> and tomorrow will be even better.
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>     *From:* Pete Travis <me at petetravis.com>
>     *To:* For participants of the Documentation Project
>     <docs at lists.fedoraproject.org>
>     *Sent:* Friday, August 23, 2013 6:54 PM
>     *Subject:* Re: Self Introduction
> 
>     On 08/23/2013 03:20 PM, Samuel W. Flint wrote:
>     > I'd be interested in proofing and contributing to the Amateur
>     Radio Guide.
>     >
>     > Sam
>     > On Fri, August 23, 2013 2:40 pm, Jérôme Fenal wrote:
>     >> 2013/8/23 Samuel W. Flint <swflint at flintfam.org
>     <mailto:swflint at flintfam.org>>
>     >>
>     >>> Well, I can't say I've done much writing in the past, or worked
>     on any
>     >>> big
>     >>> name free-software projects, but I do have a bit of code up on the
>     >>> EmacsWiki.
>     >>> I have fairly advanced computer skills, no degree, but otherwise
>     I do
>     >>> have
>     >>> programming and administrative skills.
>     >>> I have moderate people skills, and can speak well, having a firm
>     grasp
>     >>> of
>     >>> the English language.
>     >>> I feel I am an excellent match for this project because I have an
>     >>> understanding of the English language and of the technical concepts
>     >>> required for it.
>     >>>
>     >>>
>     >> âHi Sam, and welcome!
>     >>
>     >> On which documentation project woud you like to contribute, and
>     in which
>     >> area?
>     >>
>     >> You may want to review the docs table at
>     >> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs_Project_guides_tableâ,
>     <https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs_Project_guides_table%C3%A2,>and
>     tell us
>     >> where you'd like to start, either by proofreading (and getting a
>     grasp on
>     >> Docbook and the publican tool chain), or by contributing content
>     on the
>     >> guides needing love.
>     >>
>     >> Surely people here will guide you.
>     >>
>     >> Welcome again,
>     >>
>     >> J.
>     >> --
>     >> Jérôme Fenal
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>     Hi Sam, welcome to the team.
> 
>     I've sponsored your membership in the 'docs' FAS group. Now you can
>     participate in elections, go vote for a release name!
> 
>     The table Jérôme linked to has a column that will lead you to the git
>     repo for the Guides. I think you'll get the hang of docbook pretty
>     quickly, but the hardest part IMO is writing the content and I suggest
>     you dive into that first. We can help you with the markup as needed; I'm
>     happy to help where I can, and that's true of many people.
> 
>     Many of us hang out in #fedora-docs and more watch the mailing list.
>     I'm looking forward to working with you here and there.
> 
> 
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