Some editing ideas for Fedora 21

[Leslie S Satenstein]

Hi Pete and Documentationalists.

May I also suggest that a the person reading this section of release notes is assumed to have prior Linux knowledge

I took the Fedora 20 release notes and marked them up so that they read much better. By read much better, the opening paragraph of the attached document explains the "raison d'être".

If the attachment is lost, please refer to my public link https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/42050559/wip/ReleaseNotes%20Touchups.odt
(release notes touchup)

Hope to get your feedback, either favourable or other.


 
Regards 

 Leslie

Mr. Leslie Satenstein
SENT FROM MY OPEN SOURCE LINUX SYSTEM.
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