<html><body><div style="color:#000; background-color:#fff; font-family:HelveticaNeue, Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, Lucida Grande, sans-serif;font-size:10pt">Will someone please do the move for me. I took some time to fine tooth read the draft, and I am also a working stiff, with a 12hr workday (for now).<br><br><br><div><span><br></span></div><div> </div><div><div><div><div><div><div><div><span style="" lang="FR-CA">Regards</span> <div><b><font size="2"><br></font><font size="2"> Leslie</font><br></b></div> <div><font color="green"><b><font size="1">Mr. Leslie Satenstein</font><br></b></font><font style="color:rgb(191, 0, 95);" size="1" color="green"><span style="font-weight:bold;">An experienced</span> Information Technology specialist.<br>Yesterday was a good day, today is a better day,<br>and tomorrow will be even better.</font></div><font size="1" color="green"><font size="2"><a rel="nofollow" target="_blank"
href="mailto:lsatenstein@yahoo.com">lsatenstein@yahoo.com</a></font><br><font size="2">alternative: leslie.satenstein@gmail.com </font><br></font><font size="2" color="green"><b>SENT FROM MY OPEN SOURCE LINUX SYSTEM.</b><br></font><br><span style="" lang="FR-CA"></span></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><div style="display: block;" class="yahoo_quoted"> <br> <br> <div style="font-family: HelveticaNeue, Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, Lucida Grande, sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;"> <div style="font-family: HelveticaNeue, Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, Lucida Grande, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;"> <div dir="ltr"> <font size="2" face="Arial"> On Thursday, October 17, 2013 9:09 AM, Eric H. Christensen <sparks@fedoraproject.org> wrote:<br> </font> </div> <blockquote style="border-left: 2px solid rgb(16, 16, 255); margin-left: 5px; margin-top: 5px; padding-left: 5px;"> <div class="y_msg_container">-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE-----<br
clear="none">Hash: SHA512<br clear="none"><br clear="none">On Wed, Oct 16, 2013 at 06:21:46PM -0700, Leslie S Satenstein wrote:<br clear="none">> Hi Pete, <br clear="none">> Well, I took my trusty LibreOfficewriter and did a markup of the aforementioned first draft. To the group, please review my comments. The changes may appear trivial, but they are to make the document more precise and more readable.<br clear="none"><br clear="none">When will you be making these changes to the wiki (where the source lives)[0]? <br clear="none"><br clear="none">> In case the attachment is stripped due to email processing, here it is inline. Sorry to do the attachment inline. I did not want to file a bugzilla report . Changes or comments are in yellow.<br clear="none"><br clear="none">There's no need to put this in an email or file a bugzilla ticket. The source lives in the wiki and is there as a means of
collaborating. Please make your changes there.<br clear="none"><br clear="none">[0] <a shape="rect" href="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F20_Beta_release_announcement" target="_blank">https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F20_Beta_release_announcement</a><br clear="none"><br clear="none">- --Eric<br clear="none"><br clear="none">- --------------------------------------------------<br clear="none">Eric "Sparks" Christensen<div class="yqt4314762126" id="yqtfd99661"><br clear="none">Fedora Project</div><br clear="none"><br clear="none"><a shape="rect" ymailto="mailto:sparks@fedoraproject.org" href="mailto:sparks@fedoraproject.org">sparks@fedoraproject.org</a> - <a shape="rect" ymailto="mailto:sparks@redhat.com" href="mailto:sparks@redhat.com">sparks@redhat.com</a><br clear="none">097C 82C3 52DF C64A 50C2 E3A3 8076 ABDE 024B B3D1<br clear="none">- --------------------------------------------------<br clear="none">-----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE-----<br
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