<html><body><div style="color:#000; background-color:#fff; font-family:HelveticaNeue, Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, Lucida Grande, sans-serif;font-size:8pt">Hi Christopher<br><br>It works for me. I worked as tech writer and editor for topics about ERP. I had to write for French, an Spanish readers. The writer should never edit his own work beyond the first go-around.<br><div><span><br></span></div><div> </div><div><div><div><div><div><div><div><span style="" lang="FR-CA">Regards</span> <div><b><font size="2"><br></font><font size="2"> Leslie</font><br></b></div> <div><font color="green"><b><font size="1">Mr. Leslie Satenstein</font></b></font><font style="color:rgb(191, 0, 95);" color="green" size="1"><span style="font-weight:bold;"></span></font><br></div><font color="green" size="2"><b>SENT FROM MY OPEN SOURCE LINUX SYSTEM.</b><br></font><br><font face="lucida console, sans-serif" size="1"><b><font
color="black"><span style="font-weight:bold;font-size:13.5pt;color:black;"></span></font></b></font></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><div><br></div><blockquote style="border-left: 2px solid rgb(16, 16, 255); margin-left: 5px; margin-top: 5px; padding-left: 5px;"> <div style="font-family: HelveticaNeue, Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, Lucida Grande, sans-serif; font-size: 8pt;"> <div style="font-family: HelveticaNeue, Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, Lucida Grande, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;"> <div dir="ltr"> <hr size="1"> <font face="Arial" size="2"> <b><span style="font-weight:bold;">From:</span></b> Christopher Antila <christopher@antila.ca><br> <b><span style="font-weight: bold;">To:</span></b> Leslie S Satenstein <lsatenstein@yahoo.com>; For participants of the Documentation Project <docs@lists.fedoraproject.org> <br> <b><span style="font-weight: bold;">Sent:</span></b> Wednesday, April 30, 2014 12:43 AM<br>
<b><span style="font-weight: bold;">Subject:</span></b> Re: Some editing ideas for Fedora 21<br> </font> </div> <div class="y_msg_container"><br>Leslie:<br clear="none"><div class="yqt2683439445" id="yqtfd03285"><br clear="none">On 26 April 2014 16:33:53 Leslie S Satenstein wrote:<br clear="none">> May I also suggest that a the person reading this section of release notes<br clear="none">> is assumed to have prior Linux knowledge<br clear="none">> <br clear="none">> I took the Fedora 20 release notes and marked them up so that they read much<br clear="none">> better. By read much better, the opening paragraph of the attached document<br clear="none">> explains the "raison d'être".<br clear="none">> <br clear="none">> If the attachment is lost, please refer to my public link<br clear="none">> <a shape="rect" href="https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/42050559/wip/ReleaseNotes%20Touchups.od"
target="_blank">https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/42050559/wip/ReleaseNotes%20Touchups.od</a><br clear="none">> t (release notes touchup)<br clear="none">> <br clear="none">> Hope to get your feedback, either favourable or other.</div><br clear="none"><br clear="none">A majority of the Release Notes content is written from scratch with every <br clear="none">release. On the other hand, the content in Chapter 1 is mostly carried from <br clear="none">one release to the next.<br clear="none"><br clear="none">Within the next couple of days, I'll review your comments about Chapter 1, <br clear="none">then return them in an ODT file. After this, you can incorporate your revisions <br clear="none">either into the Release Notes git repository or on the wiki, along with <br clear="none">updates for Fedora 21, to heave them included in the next release.<br clear="none"><br clear="none">Will this work for you?<br clear="none"><br clear="none"><br
clear="none">Christopher<br><br></div> </div> </div> </blockquote><div></div> </div></body></html>