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On Dec 8, 2014 2:27 PM, "Chris Murphy" <<a href="mailto:lists@colorremedies.com">lists@colorremedies.com</a>> wrote:<br>
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> Let me know if there's a preferred way of doing this.<br>
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> <a href="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1170803#c21">https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1170803#c21</a><br>
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> Chris Murphy<br>
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<p dir="ltr">I like to get the expected behavior up front, then explain the ramifications. Maybe it helps people who are just skimming retain the info. ie:</p>
<p dir="ltr">"To make sure any extN filesystems that might be reused or resized are healthy, the Fedora installer automatically performs a check on filesystems it discovers. If this check takes a long time, perhaps because of large, slow, or damaged filesystems, the installer may..."</p>
<p dir="ltr">Anyway, everyone has their own writing style. Your copy is clear and concise.</p>
<p dir="ltr">Or, are you asking for it to be included in the RNs?</p>
<p dir="ltr">--Pete</p>