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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 02/08/2015 09:40 AM, Trupti Kini
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<div> I have posted the article for publishing. How long it
usually takes for the review? I wanted to add images to the
article but I din't find <b>Add media</b> option. Can anyone
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<div><i><b><font size="1">Regards,<br>
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<font size="1">Trupti Kini<br>
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Aerospace lab, IIT Bombay<br>
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Thanks for contributing to the Fedora Magazine, here are a few quick
notes on your post:<br>
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* Maybe tighten up the headline / title of the post a bit to make it
more news-y. Something like:<br>
"Fedora community in Mumbai, India celebrates the Fedora 21 release"
-- we have a global audience, so most won't know where or what "Homi
Bhabha Centre for Science Education" is (i had to google it)<br>
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* I'd probably open the article with a bit of filler about what a
release party is. Maybe something like:<br>
"Every time a new release of Fedora becomes available, Fedora user
communities around the world gather to share the new release with
each other, upgrade their systems, and eat celebratory cake. In
December, a release party was held at the..."<br>
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* With the content under the opening paragraph, it is a little hard
to follow if some of the statements about Fedora (GNOME, Openstack
etc), were said by the speakers you call out, or if they are just
statements about the release. <br>
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* For an article like this, describing what the speakers talked
about is good, but try not to get into too much detail. Some of the
quotes you have there are good stuff to include too.<br>
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cheers,<br>
ryanlerch<br>
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