[Bug 828879] Review Request: system-storage-manager - A single tool to manage your storage

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https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=828879

--- Comment #7 from Eric Sandeen <esandeen at redhat.com> ---
Ok, editorial nitpicks:

> System Storage Manager provides easy to use command line interface to manage

"provides an easy to use ..."

> technologies via single unified interface.

"technologies via a single unified interface."

> You should install the ssm if you need

Should probably say "You should install system-storage-manager if you need" ...

And maybe 2 spaces (vs 1) after every sentence in the %description?

Now I'll go point by point through review guidelines to make sure I'm not
missing anything.  Pretty simple specfile though!

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