Team--I read the .pdf that was posted on the Talking Points page on the wiki and thought it could use a few edits--I have posted a revised version in Open Office document format at the following location:

http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Marketing/TalkingPoints

Please read and give me detailed feedback--my edits included spelling, syntax, and some content enhancements.

//mjb

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