On Tue, Dec 02, 2014 at 11:00:17AM -0600, Joe Brockmeier wrote:
On 12/02/2014 10:49 AM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> As you guys are crafting improved notes, for better consistency, it
> would be great to write in present tense about the release.
> INCONSISTENT: "Fedora 21 Foobar will include special flavor crystals
> that defy gravity and help you fly like Superman."
> CONSISTENT: "Fedora 21 Foobar includes special flavor crystals that
> defy gravity and help you fly like Superman."
Be sure to use passive voice too. Paul likes that.
 May not be entirely true. Consult your attorney. Offer not valid in
Passive voice is not liked by me! Oh, wait... ;-)
Just to clarify -- I think much of the current announcement dervies,
from Alpha/Beta so it's natural it reads in future tense. I just
figured to get a head start on the rewrite as it comes from multiple
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