[commops] Re: Request for Review: "BrickHack 2016 and Fedora"

[Viorel Tabara]

On Tue Apr 05 2016 20:53:00 GMT-0600 (MDT) Justin W. Flory <jflory7(a)gmail.com&gt; 
wrote:
> https://communityblog.fedoraproject.org/?p=1143&preview=1&_ppp=81...
>  
>  I was hoping to get some feedback about the post from others and have someone 
>  take a quick read to give a +1 / -1 on this post. 
+1 from me

Now, English isn't my mother tongue and I've only written technical docs so 
please take the suggestions below with a grain of salt:

- "The organizers describe it as the following.": replace '.' with a
':' 
- Quoted text: either indent 2 chars more or use quotes or change font color
- "Fedora Ambassadors of North America": link to 
  https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_Ambassadors_North_America_(FAMNA) 
- "field since he works for as a system administrator for": extra
"for" 
- "they hung out at with the team at": extra "at" 

Thanks for writing this up, getting to learn Fedora as a community is the best 
part of being a CommOps-er.

-- 
Viorel