On Mon, Nov 26, 2012 at 10:04 PM, Luis Villa luis@tieguy.org wrote:
"If any provision of this License is invalid or unenforceable under applicable law, it [has a duty to] not affect the validity or enforceability of the remainder of this License..."
shall -> will ("it will not affect...")
Since we're quibbling, I'd argue that "does" is better than "will" here in order to keep verb tenses the same. Otherwise, I think your suggestions are a good idea.