18 Apr
2017
18 Apr
'17
7:47 a.m.
On 04/17/2017 10:52 AM, Bill Nottingham wrote:
Practical: "lights up" reads as very jargon-y to me. Maybe "... platform to power hardware, clouds, and containers that enables software..."
I also had an issue with "lights up" - sounds like jargon-y slang or just awkward / silly (was the first thing that stood out to me.)
Agreed that some form of "enable" is a good swap-in for "lights up."
~m