On 04/18/2017 04:45 PM, Jeff Sandys wrote:
My real point is 'lights up ...' is the tail of this dog, the
People and solutions are the legs, platform the body, Fedora the head.
the pieces need to be in order to make sense. Platform lights up
doesn't make sense, enable is better here. But the in the context of
people light up and solutions light up, this makes sense.
Understood. I think even with your repair, though, the phrase is too
cheesy to work with.